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Abducted and Transformed into a Human Barbie Doll
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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
eBGEhA I value the article.Really thank you! Fantastic. Comment by georgia on 12/19/08 what a neat way to go Comment by Dianna on 03/20/08 I sort of wish that the sister and mother found out that their plan backfired. Comment by SassySue on 07/05/04 I agree with Barbara Lynn, the lack of quotation marks and other gramatical errors detracts from what otherwise is an erotic, sexy, satisfying tale with an unexpected ending. Comment by Jane Hudson on 06/30/04 Great story mad but fun Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 06/30/04 Sue, the premise and the plot were good. However, there leaves a lot to be desired in the English department. There is no punctuation, no quotation marks, and at one point in the story, you misused the word faint, as you spelled it feint. |
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