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The Academy
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/04/07
JO-ELLEN MEETS HER CONTACT WHO RESCUES HER FROM THE INDUCTOR. DIANE, IN MAKING A PUBLIC APPEARANCE TO OPEN THE SAFE HOUSE IS TARGETED BY ASSASSINS WHO ARE CAUGHT. JO CALLS OUT TO HER MOTHER AND THE AGENCY FOR PICK UP. DIANA GIVES HER LIFE TO SAVE HER DAUGHTER. WHY SHE HAD TO DIE, I WANT TO KNOW. HE WAS SUCH A GREAT LADY. AT LEAST TURN GINNY INTO HER LOVERS DEVOTED WIFE FOR HIM, NOT AN ACADEMY SLUT. NOW THE AGENCY LOSES TWO MORE IN ROSEBUD AND MAXIE KIM. TINA, THERE IS A WAY TO RETURN DIANA TO JO. OF COURSE IT WILL TAKE AN ACADEMY SLUT TO DO IT.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/04/07
NOW THAT JESSICA HAS BEEN TRANSFORMED INTO A REAL WOMAN, SHE NOW HAS THE RIGHTS OF A MISTRESS, ONLY THING IS THAT SHE STILL HAS THAT PAIN/PLEASURE INDUCER BEHIND HER EAR. AT LEAST RAVENTREE TAKES JESSICA OUT TO PICK THEIR NEWEST VICTIMS. MAKES YOU WONDER IF JESSICA WILL FORGET ABOUT BEING JO-ELLEN AND WHAT DIANA WILL DO WHEN SHE IS CALLED. i AM SURPRISED THAT DIANA DOESN'T DIANA DOESN'T HAVE AGENTS READY TO STRIKE. GOOD ACTION-ADVENTURE STORY.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/03/07
JO-ELLEN WAS RECRUITED BY "MOTHER" INTO THE AGENCY. BUT JO WOULD HAVE GONE AFTER THE ACADEMY ANYWAY. SHE PROVES TO BE WORTHY OF BECOMING A MISTRESS. DIANA VISITS HER AND GIVES HER A SPECIAL GIFT THAT WILL LET DIANA COME TO JO'S AID. THE ACADEMY'S TRAINING EASILY REPLACES THAT WHICH THE AGENCY WOULD HAVE PROVIDED. WHAT'S INTERESTING IS JO BEING PLACED INTO A CONVERSION CHAMBER. INTERESTING HOW MUCH THE ACADEMY'S PROCEDURE IS LIKE THAT CREATED BY THE ELLIS GROUP. BUT THEN THAT MOLE CAN EASILY LEAK INFORMATION.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/02/07
WELL, WELL, WELL. LOOKS LIKE YET ANOTHER "SISTERHOOD" WANNABE IS ATTACKING DIANA. HER ADOPTED DAUGHTER TAKES ON THE CHALLENGE OF "OUTING" THE ACADEMY. IT WILL TAKE ALL OF HER TRAINING AND MENTAL CONTROL TO BEAT RAVENTREE. TINA, I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT DIANA JO-ELLEN COOK UP FOR THE ACADEMY.

Comment by Cassandra on 02/12/07
Hi Michelle,

Part 4 of The Academy was just posted here. I totally enjoyed it as well as the three preceding installments. I hope you will continue writing. Your stories are very well thought out, well paced and enjoyable.

Cassandra


Comment by cassandra on 01/04/07
Hi VMS!

I just finished parts 2 and 3. This story is wickedly exciting and I am thoroughly enjoying. You really have a marvelous way of juggling the various characters and subplots. Thank you for these latest 2 parts. I hope I do not have to wait very long for the next sequence.

Fondly,

Cassandra


Comment by Michelle on 10/11/06
Hi VMS,

A brilliant follow on from your earlier story on the sisterhood, like cassandra I find having a JoEllen pass as a 16 year old odd, however I also see it is part of your future plot.

I look forward to the following parts to this series, please don't keep us waiting to long :)

Keep up the good work

your admirer

M


Comment by Cassandra on 09/04/06
Dear VMS,

I have loved the story and will anxiously await Chapter 2. I do confess to being a little confused as JoEllen is a college graduate. She is also mature and has a job with the most covert government agency. How then, can she be part of a group of boys 14-16? Please help.

Thanks,

Cassandra


Comment by "gina" on 08/26/06
Thank you for the sexy minutes you offered to me, reading your first
chapter of  Academy!!!
Please... make this master piece very very  ...long!
Thanks              "gina"



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