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Accidental Momma
by Slothrop

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Comment by rone welles on 06/14/09

WELL I READ IT AGAIN AND IT IS STILL EXTREAMLY GOOD..
we all need to read about what happened to carrol and help her take out the gang ....please kissy kissy hug rone

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/05/07

i SAW ON BIG CLOSET THAT IS AN ANGELVERSE STORY. WELL, WHERE IS ANGEL IN
THE STORY? ME, I MUST ADMIT THAT CAROL IS THE TYPE OF LADY THAT I WOULD
LIKE TO MEET. HER SELF SACRIFICE FOR HER BABY BROTHER SPEAKS VOLUMES FOR
HER. SHE NEVER ASKED TO BE CASTRATED BY THAT BOOT, BUT SHE DID MAKE THE
MOST OF A BAD SITUATION. WILL CAROL BE IN MORE ADVENTURES? SHE WOULD DO
GREAT IN THE "MEN IN BLACK DRESSES SAGA BY VALENTINA MICHELLE SMITH.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/23/07

This accidental mom shows true grit in the story. Now, Slothrop, you need to conclude the story by letting Carol find peace after destroying the gang. Maybe even finding a guy to marry to be a father for Toby. Truly a great story

Comment by RONE on 12/19/05

STRONG STORY A LOT OF VIOLANCE AND HURTING DESPERATION...
THIS SHOWED A EXCEPIONAL STRONG YOUNG MAN THAT DID WHAT HAD TO BE DONE ...LIFE CAN BE CRULE WE ALL KNOW THIS ....HIS TRANSITON TO FEMALE WAS NECESSARY BECAUSE OF DAMAGE TO HIS BODY AND THE STORY
SHOWED AN SUPER GOOD ENDING.....WELL DONE THIS STORY HELD MY ATTENTION ALL THE WAY THRU YOU GET MY VOTE FOR THE BEST STORY OF THE YEAR .....GOOD CLEAN FUN AND INTERESTING CONCEPT GREAT ENDING

THANK YOU THANK YOU RONE

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 04/23/04

Definitely a great story. You have a talent for busting stereotypes, and this was no exception. I always enjoy reading a tale of a punk predator suddenly discovering himself to be prey. This was definitely a cut above the standard TG tale. It reminds me of that poster of Lady Liberty holding a child in one arm and a gun in the other. "The most dangerous place in the world is between a mother and her children."

Comment by anonymousOne on 04/23/04

Slothrop,

This stroy was a bit violent, but never lacked for action and held my interest throughout. Nice escape fantasy. Except for his real Mom, it was clear who were the good people and who were the bad people. Shallow, but lot's of fun. Thank you for sharing.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/22/04

Great story they the bad guy's thought Carol a sissy but keeping Toby safe they found the sissy could bite and bite hard. Lovely how she had great friends helping and daddy came and helped save her in the end.

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