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The Accident
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by juliej on 09/25/04
it was an intresting story not as good as previous ones but the tale is there its intresting how many husbands want to try dresses on but to be caught in one is bad enought but having to face up to staff donald was lucky that he was a decent boss and the staff stood by him
Comment by Early June on 09/20/04
Trying to read this story, I got the feeking this must have been ine of the first that you have written.  It is much less careful in articulation than your recent tales. Also, while it described a lot of the actions taken, there were no reasons given that would justify them.  Apparently Donald was not man enough to run his business or to keep his wife happy.
Comment by Bobbie on 09/15/04
Sorry Claudia I don't agree with the funny part.
Human interactions to this extent can never really be humerous.

Overall thought the whole story was excellent and much better
than several previous by this author.

I especially liked the idea that even though Monica forced the
issue to a certain extent she did not go radical and force a bunch
of things that might not be reversable as so many have under
similar situations.

I believe that they will both be happy and enlightened in their
future inter actions.
Comment by Claudia on 09/14/04
"Wife catches husband in a dress, goes bonkers." has to be one of the funniest plot summations I've seen on this site!!


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