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Comment by Mariah on 05/12/13
For me the high point of this story was in the girls shower when she stood over that spoiled bitches face and gave her a good crotch shot of her crazy glue vajayjay!!! That moment would have made the front page of the school paper. Comment by Aleesha on 07/12/09 Yet another great story. It was sweet and sentimental and although I know some of your stories are similar I can't wait to read them. forget about critcism and tell us more stories. Thanks. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/31/07 Janet, ULNO IS A FOOL!!! you did a great job of telling the journey of a young man dressing as a girl for a play. But you cut it too short. she still uses breast forms. she needs to complete the journey for her and Tom Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/14/01 Janet has graced the pages of this site with yet another fine story. Although there are similarites between all stories as there is only so much you can do with a transformaiton of an individual from one gender to that of another she continues to weave so many fine aspects into her stories I always find them a joy to read. Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 07/12/01 Good. Not as good as "Terms of Life," but mighty good, just the Comment by Ulno on 07/12/01 Same story...over and over. New names, new faces. ZZZZZ... Comment by Nora Deret on 07/12/01 Janet dahlink, |
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