Great story Janet, quite a hoot to think girls got dumped for the chance to date Beth, and for them to say it was Beth had a much nicer attitude says it all!  If I got dumped like that I would take a serious look in the mirror at my own faults.

JANET, THIS IS MY SECOND FAVORITE AFTER BEATING HEART. YOU MADE STANLEY AARON BETH'S LOVER, NOT BILL THIS TIME. I KNOW YOU HAD YET TO MEET ME, BUT I STILL THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY. NOW I KNOW THAT HEATHER WAS STAN'S SISTER, BUT THE DETAILS OF HOW SHE DIED WERE NEVER BROUGHT UP. NOR BETH AND HEATHER'S FRIENDSHIP. JANET'S FUED NEVER REALLY CAME ABOUT, AN EMPTY PLOT DEVICE, BUT IT DID GIVE CAUTION . JANET I HATE TO BE CRITICAL OF YOU. BUT I THINK A FRIEND CRITICING YOU BETYTER THAN OTHERS

My gosh this sounds something like I'd have loved to have happened to me. If only my mother had found out and had allowed myself to bring out my true character when I was younger.

This is a story that has some validity in it as it much of it can in fact happen in this time and age. It only takes someone talented as Janet is to bring it out in the open and tell it in such a wonderous manner that she has perfected.

Diane

    I loved this. I think it would be neat if you did another story from the hairy-legs dresser. Lie, if he were a second-rate jock who broke his leg so he couldn't get any scholarship, so he does this. Only he's about 6'2" and muscular and it's going to be much, much harder to buy him as a girl.