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Adorable
by Melody Sims

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Comment by Ron on 12/18/12
Just finished reading 'Adorable' and it was great.  I loved how she suduced him into becoming feminine.  I hope you will write more stories like this.

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Comment by Andrea F. on 12/13/05
Delicious. I also adored the way she slowly led him into his true nature, and how their relationship blossomed.The butt plug and the strap on could have been greatly expanded with the same gentle sensitive style. Every CD's dream, to be trained, encouraged and loved.

Comment by Just Me on 11/18/04
Paragraphs.  Paragraphs.  Please don't write such long paragraphs, it makes it hard to read.  Other than that, a nice story

Comment by sissy jennifer on 11/03/04
What a wonderful story! I enjoyed the way she gently feminized him without the usual humiliation thing. A very well-written and thought-out story. More please:)
jennifer

Comment by Annabel on 11/02/04
Lovely story - beautifully written.  I particularly liked the way the relationship between husband and wife developed so naturally and lovingly.
Just a comment on presentation, use a new paragraph each time someone speaks.  It is much easier to read on the screen.
I appreciate you couldn't know that, because this was your first story on this site.  Please don't let it be the last.
Hugs, Annabel

Comment by Bobbie on 11/02/04
Not an editor so will just say this is the way things should be between those that choose the way.
So many others when they write seem to think the Female must be
menacing and litterly cruel.
Not many are lucky enough to be lead to the scene.
Far fewer find acceptance after the fact.
Loved almost every thing and the details.
Could flesh out the interaction between Sylvia and Melody? a
little more. Was kind of left in doubt and would have appreciated
a little more between checking Wedding books and the actual wedding.


Comment by Pauline on 11/02/04
Absolutely luscious story -- and yes, both Monica and Gwen are "Adorable."  It is wonderful and exciting to read about a coupling without the unnecessary degradation so many storytellers use.

Comment by Donna Dee on 11/01/04
 The best man/wife cross dress story ever - by a mile.   More please, about the same couple or even a different pair.
I agree with Tina about the paragraphs though.

Comment by Tina on 11/01/04
Great story well written;  If I have any gripes at all, can I ask that you break your paragraphs up into smaller units, just to make it easier to read.

Love Tina x

Comment by GFriday on 11/01/04
I REALLY love this.  Let's have more!!!!!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/31/04
Lots of love in this story; GREAT job.

Comment by Thong Lover on 10/31/04
Very hot,one lucky guy.Wished my wife would dress me  more.Don,t want to be female just wear more sexy things. thanks



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