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Adorable Debbie
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Comment by stephanie on 06/26/15
this is 2015 and still no part 3 or 4 can u make plz make part 3 or 4 for us to read thanks :) Comment by Marqo on 07/11/12 Cripes, the wrath of Debbie! Sounds like a good title for a film.(See, I read to the end:))I agree with all you say about sapmmy coenmmts. I get loads, usually full of vacuous flattery ending with a huge plug for whatever they do. Do they think we are stupid?I also hate automated DMs on twitter. If I get one after following someone I usually delete them. Ghastly things, esepcially if accompanied by a sales pitch.Thanks for the post, Debbie!Jane Comment by Annabelle B on 01/04/10 Don't leave us hanging Girl! Finish your story it shows too much potential! Comment by Silvia. on 12/26/09 Bad story. Comment by juliej on 01/11/08 as per my previous comments Comment by Sam Katz on 10/07/06 crossdressing (transvetism) is not the same as "crossing genders". If you need help to correct this, e-mail me. Comment by julie j on 08/07/05 a nice tale but i wonder how much of this could work out to be true in real life great story well done Comment by tasha on 07/18/05 it times for part 3, also like to said you need moer action with the girls and dont let debbie for for a guy and turn gay it like all the writers are gay Comment by Teri on 12/24/04 A nice fairy tale lol! I just love all the characters my Robert was name Darrell. Comment by layla on 12/08/04 the story is great but why does the boy has to have a boy friend ,if if that was me ill be a lesbain Comment by Early June on 12/02/04 Sweet story. It has a nice variation on the TG theme. You wrote all the characters in your story as loving, caring individuals. If only real life were populated like that. I hope you will bless us with an additional sample of your talent. You certainly have plenty of ammunition, Playmates, neighbors, teachers and storekeepers. It looks to be a lot of fun Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/23/04 Sweet story Comment by Gina LaVaLampe on 11/21/04 I agree that this is a great start to what we hope will be the further adventures of Adorable Debbie. The premise has got to be one that most gurls dream of! Comment by Nellie D on 11/19/04 A nice story that could have turned out very nasty if the girls weren't so nice themselves. It was well written with few or no errors to cause mind stumble. It does seem like just the beginning of a much longer story. Comment by Reader on 11/19/04 Great story...let's see a Part II, III, etc. Keep it going! |
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