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Adrians New Uniform
by Josie Brian

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Comment by Same person below on 02/26/11
I just have to read this again. It brought a tear to my eye last time I read it, I just have to read it again.

Comment by not given on 08/26/10
my favourite story from my life. i have read it 3 times in two days.

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Comment by The Cyclops on 08/24/10
The writer of the story says 'I don't like to repeat what many others have done well already, if I can't think of something original or a little different, I prefer to stop'.
        There is the most original and plausible story that one could ever imagine, but very surprisingly no one has ever thought of writing it. Obviously it would need to start extremely young and have a mother who desperately wanted a girl and not a boy. It would need to be partly set in a 'third world country' where money talks and hormones are no problem, neither are the fitting of artificial testicles; those for dogs are readily available on the Internet. It would also need to have, by chance, the right nature and disposition of the child. Email given.

Comment by Yoron on 05/21/08
Welcome to the plane of truly and all and for once weirdly warped dads.
With a dad like that the social services should be involved right from the start.

Awh sh*

Yoron.


Comment by Josie on 08/18/07
Thanks everyone, glad you all enjoyed this tale. Keen observations from Early June & Jezzi Stewart, it's too easy to leave gaping holes in the plot.
Francine, thanks for following the story. Appologies for ending it a bit sharply, I guess you're right. I got a bit bored with it and couldn't think of any new ideas.
I don't like to repeat what many others have done well already, if I can't think of something original or a little different,I prefer to stop.

Comment by juliej on 08/03/07
a brilliant story what a way to go and a lesson learnt the hard way for the bully

Comment by Matthew on 02/25/06
Well I enjoyed reading this story ....It sounds as if The Bully of The Story Peter James got what he deserved.


Comment by Adrian on 10/13/04
OK I admit to owing a skirt and letting my friends mother think I'm a girl. I'll even admit going to a theme park wearing a bikini and mini skirt but the rest of this story is not true. I don't mind Josie writing this story but I want to make it clear that I am not living as a girl, only the first part of this story is true.

Comment by Early June on 09/23/04
I liked this story.  You have a nice story telling technique.  You might need to rethink part of your plot before completing the next chapter.  It seems that dad and mom are colluding to get him into skirts for some untold reason, and that they might have a perexisting relationship. That is the only excuse I can imagine that would make the mother ignore what everyone else seems to have discovered.
Please don't stop here, the story is too goood and has too much promise.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/08/04
I liked the story, but agree that the ending seems rushed, with his acceptance of being a girl permanently coming too easily, even with Cathy's preferences, given his initial great reluctance.

Helen must be pretty dense.  The whole school knows and somebody would surely leak it to the papers, etc.  What happens when Helen does find out, as she is bound to, from some other source, and realises she's been betrayed by both father and son?

The son is a much better person than the father.

Comment by Francine on 09/08/04
Hi Josie  :)

Hmmm.....A very good story, but.....
Did you get tired of it?
It seems like you rushed the ending. :(

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/06/04
Dad seems to be thinking more of himself than of his son.  When do the hormones start ???  :-)  Looking forward to part 3.

Comment by Briar on 08/29/04
Oh, yes!  Had to chuckle at the ending.  Lovely story, and well told.  Thanks.

Comment by Pippa K. on 08/27/04
Have enjoyed all your stories to date.  This may be the best so far!  

Comment by Francine on 08/26/04
Hi Josie  :)

Yes! Please continue this tale.

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Robyn on 08/25/04
I want a sequel!

Comment by Paula on 08/25/04
hope you continue what happens when they go to dinner. The story sort of remind me of the Japanese cartoon Deliquent in Drag only the boy force into a skirt isn't really a deliquent.

Comment by mikie on 08/24/04
A very likeable story.  Thank you for writing it.



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