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The Adventures of Jeckyl and Hyde
by Jason

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Comment by Blue on 12/13/11
An answer from an epxert! Thanks for contributing.

Comment by Mr Man on 05/03/01
I second what the others have said. You've got the makings of a good story but please use paragraphs. I'd also like to see your story expanded a bit. Give us more about the setting, charactors, etc... Thanks for writing.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/02/01
as written differcult to read but the story idea was as good as Sister Hyde and Ms Hyde.

Comment by MonaR on 05/02/01
The whole story was a single paragraph and made for difficult read.



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