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Adventures of a Novice
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Comment by Mariah on 04/25/13
Yet another story that shares many real events of life presented in a way that escalates to happiness, congruity and a well deserved dose of justice for the few that are in need of it. Janet was lucky to have family and friends that understood her needs and stayed at her side through the most difficult of times. Comment by Stanley on 08/28/09 One of the sweetest stories I've read. Gentle, compassionate, very possible. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/15/07 Janet, great story. Janet goes from dressing part-time to full-time. Her ad finally accepts her,then dies in a tragic accident. Then Grandpa sees that Janet is fullfilling her dreams and accepts her. At school, the bullies attack her and give her an unexpected gift. Rick, her "man" finally accepts her, and makes her a complete woman before the operation. Janet, I hope you are never attacked. Comment by Rone Welles on 10/19/06
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