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Altered Fates: Chess Prodigy
by Danielle J

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Comment by Lipika on 06/15/12
I born as a boy but i want to transform in to girl can any please help me please

Comment by Mande on 12/15/11
Aritcles like this just make me want to visit your website even more.

Comment by Susan Barker on 06/10/08
I have only read the first two chapters at the moment but, I realy like this story, keep up the good work

Comment by Dianna on 05/20/08
I really enjoyed this sugar, I honestly did. There was only one part that made me wince, and that was the bit with religion, it felt somewhat unnecessary. Still, I enjoyed myself, thank you!

Comment by Will Allison on 12/17/07
I have read all four and I hope you will bring closure to the Melody Character, your stories are reviting and kept me on the edge of my seat until I had finished if you can please continue the story / adventure no one else writes quite like you do.

Comment by Cassandra on 03/27/04
I hope there is going to be some more to this story line. I for one like to hear what happens to the chess players and Melody. I hope she gets over the lost of her brother/mother.


Cassandra

Comment by Kahu Kanei on 06/13/02

 This series of four short stories when combined make a very readable story.
 I had been wondering how Kim and Stacey would be worked in and that resolved.  Not too bad of job, though Stacy and Melody in one spot, would think someone's hair would stand on end.
 We see the protagonist transform and grow.  Peter/Melody has to struggle and resolve many things.  And at the end; Melody finds herself not less of a person because of the medallion, but even more of a well-rounded person.
 Work on the background details and flesh out the characters some more, could probably sell this.
 Please keep up the good work, will be watching.
 Respectfully yours,
 Kahu

Comment by Michelle Annie Tierney on 06/10/02
As a transgendered male to female i simply luv all of your stories.  They are magical and speak to my heart as one who would magically wish to become female.   Your stories have heart and speak to acceptance of our female selves and the letting go of our male ego.  
There is no senseless sex or dominantion present in other stories.   I simply love your writing and it speaks directly to my heart and what i wish to become.
Luv
Michelle



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