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Altered Fates - Gun Moll
by Geoff

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Comment by Geoff on 04/16/13
Testing but thanks for the comments :)

Comment by Karen E. Lea on 03/10/05
Hi Geoff,

An excellent well written story. Well done.

Karen.

Comment by Anne Baker on 02/05/02
Geoff, what a wonderful story. I don't usually read magical transformation stories but I'm glad I read this one. Very rich imagery coupled with excellent characterization led to an enchanting read. Top marks on this and I am very much looking forward to reading your future work.

Comment by Mr. Ram on 02/04/02
Excellent story! This is one of my ten favorite TG stories. I thought that I had left a review, as I don't delete a story frome my HD until I've reviewed it. Could I have e-mailed a review?
Mr. Ram

Comment by Morpheus on 10/04/01
An amusing tale and an enjoyable read.

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 03/11/01
Well, well, well!  Very nicely done, Geoff!  Welcome to the trenches and, if this first story is any indication, you're going to be a most welcome addition.  I am very impressed at your attention to detail and your characterizations.  The story line held together nicely and moved along smartly.  I noticed no spelling errors and your usages seemed "spot on".  All in all, a VERY auspicious beginning.  My congratulations, Geoff and I am very pleased to be what seems to be the first to give you feedback on this, your first story.  I look forward to your next with great anticipation.  
                                       Cathy_t_ said that!



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