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After the Dance
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Comment by Penelope Swallows on 04/15/24
Chapter Four - Sissy Play could only be beter if Missy & Jennie had chastity cages in pink & lavender on.Still a very hot & well written story. Comment by Pixi on 01/26/19 Hi Becky I think you should have Missy and Jenni dress as pretty ballerinas in hot pink tights and tutus then have them pirouette through the mall and Hooters cafe! Comment by thisisme on 02/13/14 I have to agree with sylvia in the case of this story. A person whom I love who so completely changes from the person I thought they were into someone I don't recognize could not hope to retain my undying devotion. They ain't the same person. It is why people fall out of love. Comment by Silvia. on 11/02/10 This isn't a TG story! Comment by sissy Nicole on 07/22/07 Great story, thank you Comment by juliej on 05/07/07 good storry what a briliant way to humilate there men folk brilliant what a way to go &how devious these girls are brilliant lok forward to readng more soon Comment by Dellamarie on 02/25/04 Jezzi, if you look at Part 1 she did deal with that aspect regarding Bob and Carol. It hasn't been dealt with since. I took it for my part as simple femdom. You seem to be looking for believability instead of suspension of disbelief and very thoughtfully like all your critiques. Comment by muffy on 02/25/04 i very much like your style of writing, especially the humiliation of your poor victims. keep up the good work, id love to see more of your writings and thankyou so much for this cute story. Comment by Amy on 02/25/04 Becky: Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/24/04 Where is there any love in these two relationships. It doesn't seem like these two women are using feminization to teach a lesson or make their husbands better persons or reform them, just for their own selfish pleasure. Do they really hate them as much as it seems? How do Bob and john feel about their wives now? I could certainly see love turning to hate on their part. Comment by Dellamarie on 02/24/04 Becky I am so glad you posted this great story here. Part 3 ought to be luscious if you have Missy and Jenni having to give up a lot of their pastimes on the ranch. And Carol's probably already figuring what she's going to decorate her office with once Bob/Missy is the junior office girl. Maybe Jenni can take a femme role in whatever her job is. Comment by Alannah on 02/24/04 This was one of the most lovely stories I have ever read. Keep up the Comment by Nancy Garcia on 02/24/04 Just an adorable story .Thankyou. I find myself wanting to be a participant. Please write more. Comment by Elyse on 02/24/04 Jeez, Becky, where have you BEEN as a TG fiction writer? You wrote the first part in 1998 and now we get Part 2 and hopefully part 3 coming soon? You are absolutely one of the best TG fiction writers I have EVER come across anywhere. You paint the portraits so well, lay out the action and pace it so well. I hope this series is not your last. And I wait anxiously for the next installment! Go girl! Comment by Sissy Riki on 02/24/04 Excuse me Alyse for exuding my cliche remarks, I'm so sorry. Part 2 was fabulous Becky, you are really letting Missy and John have it. I especially loved thier lunch at Hooters. Can't wait for part 3. Sissi Riki Comment by Adrilee on 02/24/04 Wow! This only gets better. Can't believe I didn't read it over at FM. Eagerly awaiting part 3. |
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