Chapter Four - Sissy Play could only be beter if Missy & Jennie had chastity cages in pink & lavender on.Still a  very hot & well written story.

Hi Becky I think you should have Missy and Jenni dress as pretty ballerinas in hot pink tights and tutus then have them pirouette through the mall and Hooters cafe!
Kind regards,Pixie xx

I have to agree with sylvia in the case of this story. A person whom I love who so completely changes from the person I thought they were into someone I don't recognize could not hope to retain my undying devotion. They ain't the same person. It is why people fall out of love.

This isn't a TG story!
DISGUSTING!
You make men idiots, and women evil!
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story, thank you

good storry what a briliant way to humilate there men folk brilliant what a way to go &how devious these girls are brilliant lok forward to readng more soon

Jezzi, if you look at Part 1 she did deal with that aspect regarding Bob and Carol.  It hasn't been dealt with since.  I took it for my part as simple femdom. You seem to be looking for believability instead of suspension of disbelief and very thoughtfully like all your critiques.  

That's perfectly okay, but it's not like Becky didn't deal with the sex part at all.  It just wasn't emphasized.  Just a thought, no flame intended.

i very much like your style of writing, especially the humiliation of your poor victims. keep up the good work, id love to see more of your writings and thankyou so much for this cute story.
                                                muffy

Becky:

Just a great story.  My crossdressing life has always had a passion for pantyhose and tampons and you have included both.  One thing that I would have added is at Hooters.  One of my adventures was asking the Hooter girl to buy me a pair of Hooters pantyhose.  They apparently sold them in the ladies room and I had to ask the bar girl for $3 in quarters.  I am not sure she knew they were for me but it was a great adventure.  I am sure that Missy would have enjoyed it as well.

Can't wait until part 3.

You go girl!!!

Amy

    Where is there any love in these two relationships.  It doesn't seem like these two women are using feminization to teach a lesson or make their husbands better persons or reform them, just for their own selfish pleasure.  Do they really hate them as much as it seems?  How do Bob and john feel about their wives now?  I could certainly see love turning to hate on their part.
    On the other hand, they deserve it; they've had numerous opportunities to get away, and haven't taken them.  You haven't played the "but the sex was fantastic" card as a motivator for their continued cooperation, so the only thing holding them is exposure to friends and family.  It should be pretty obvious to them by this time that exposure is not only the lesser evil, but probably inevitable and in the wives' plans.  
   

Becky I am so glad you posted this great story here. Part 3 ought to be luscious if you have Missy and Jenni having to give up a lot of their pastimes on the ranch.  And Carol's probably already figuring what she's going to decorate her office with once Bob/Missy is the junior office girl.  Maybe Jenni can take a femme role in whatever her job is.

This was one of the most lovely stories I have ever read. Keep up the
good work.

Just an adorable story .Thankyou. I find myself wanting to be a participant. Please write more.

Jeez, Becky, where have you BEEN as a TG fiction writer?  You wrote the first part in 1998 and now we get Part 2 and hopefully part 3 coming soon?  You are absolutely one of the best TG fiction writers I have EVER come across anywhere.  You paint the portraits so well, lay out the action and pace it so well.  I hope this series is not your last.  And I wait anxiously for the next installment! Go girl!

Excuse me Alyse for exuding my cliche remarks, I'm so sorry. Part 2 was fabulous Becky, you are really letting Missy and John have it. I especially loved thier lunch at Hooters. Can't wait for part 3. Sissi Riki

Wow! This only gets better.  Can't believe I didn't read it over at FM.  Eagerly awaiting part 3.