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A Girl Want to Be
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by real confused on 10/18/12
You're right, Wilhelmina.  This whole danged story is off the hizoo.

Comment by Wilhelmina on 12/13/11
This inforamiton is off the hizool!

Comment by GDE on 09/05/01
What a nice and original story, and a loverly ending.

Comment by Terry on 09/05/01
Congratulations Jennifer, you were able to pry a few tears out of me.  The thought of never seeing my parents again was sad but you alleviated that problem quite handily.  Very good story.

Comment by Nora Deret on 09/04/01
Dear Jennifer.
I loved the new story.. and your little surprise at the end was a wonderful ending to the story.. keep up the good work.

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 09/04/01
Very nice story, Jennifer.  I could feel your excitement as I read it.  Please keep writing.  We miss you.



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