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Alice
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Comment by Sarah Brianne Smith on 10/16/16
Strange story about an Aunt who experienced drug based misery 2x...she wants to prevent the death of her nephew and ends up killing him herself through misguided self righteousness, lies, kidnapping, abandonment...her nephew had every right to develop into a macho jerk. Now the Aunt has a ready made daughter to replace the 2 she lost. Auntie is not a good person and it would have been poetic justice if the new niece turned back to drugs becoming the beach harlot. After all, Alice no longer needs to fear the X Factor! Forced is very hard to swallow. Comment by link building on 07/18/14 M2x5P2 Very neat article post. Really Cool. Comment by bttp on 03/15/10 PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I love this story and just keep rereading it. Is there anymore anywhere else? Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 08/05/09 I'm sorry, but nothing forced is good. Alice's aunt isn't a good person, she is bad, she betrayed Alice. Comment by Launa on 04/18/09 I am so happy right now!! I read the the beggining of part 1 of this story years ago and it stuck with me. I looked for it later but I could never find it again until I stumbled upon it tonight. I love the little thing in this story, like how the aunt almost laughs when Alice's pants no longer fit. Thanks, and please right more!! Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07 Lisa, are there any further stories of Alice? Please continue her story Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/07/07 What a story, Now you need to tell Alice's tale as she grows into womanhood And does she get pregnant too? Comment by juliej on 09/12/06 the second part of this story is as intersting as previous but haraold just seem to fall in with it maybe this is what he had wanted prevoiusly despite the problems of refusal Comment by angela j on 11/08/05 Lisa, Comment by julie j on 08/02/05 A ROTTEN TRICK TO PERFORM TO HER NEPHEW BUT TO LEARN A LEESONM LIKE THAT WAS GREAT NOW HE HAS NOW BECOME SHE PERMANTLY WHAT A WAY TO GO WELL DONE WITH THIS STORY WELL WRITTEN AND VERY ENJOYABLE Comment by julie j on 08/01/05 a very good story its great that hios aunt is quick witted and intellegent but what i way to teach him a leeson well desereved pehaps now he will learn the hard way well done i will comment further after reading the 2nd part of the story Comment by Shiela Brier on 03/19/05 ANOTHER WONDERFFUL STORY THAT ILLUSTRATES YOUR YOUR EXCELLENT SITE CARRY ON THE GOOD FEELINGS YOU ENDGENDER. Comment by rone on 02/26/05 Well done loved the finish but now a finding that JJ is a DEA Comment by Steven Baird on 02/09/05 i loved the story how i wish that i could be turned into a woman with lovely big beautiful breasts like he was . If only the story were true.Ilove anything female from wearing a dress to. breast forms to lovely bras panties and stockings plus corsets. Comment by Kristi Licker on 01/12/05 Great story. I as a xdresser would almost enjoy something like this. This story was wel written. I hpe you write many more along these lines. Comment by julie j on 01/11/05 a heavey story well worth reading a leson learned possible but its the hard way to go about it well done more on this story if possible wonderfull Comment by Terri on 01/04/05 I loved this story, as I have all of the other "Foxtales". I just wish more of them had been written. If you read this Lisa, please let me know if you've written any new stories or are even planning to. I own all your books and have reread them so often I know them by heart. I'd love to enjoy a new story, hopefully with artwork, from your wonderfully creative and talented mind. Of all the authors I've read, you come closest to putting into words my deepest fantasies. Comment by Paula on 01/01/05 a little long for my reading enjoyment but the tale itself was well done of what I read of it. Comment by Diane Castle on 01/01/05 Lisa, |
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