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The Alien Within or Holy Crap, There's An Alien In My Bed!
by Lorraine B.

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Comment by dominique on 12/18/06
it needs to be finished!

Comment by jo on 03/31/05
yes please finish, it almost like the oracle or gabby, with such details that it almost seems you are there,

Comment by Mary on 10/21/02
A great story.I can't wait for the rest of it.



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