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All 18+ Straight and/or Bi- Curious Men Must Read This!
by Master

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Comment by Silvia.     (from Brazil) on 11/08/09
Oh master!!!!!!!!! What a bad,bad, bad story!!!!!!!! rsrsrsrs.
How did you have courage for writing that?
Silvia.

Comment by Sissy Phyll on 01/02/07
MASTER  I followed all of your instructions and did as I was told to do.  I just automatically did what I wa ordered to do, it was just so natural to act like that.  Why did i do that?  Its not me or is it the real me and did the sissy just take over.  Maybe i do need a MASTER to give me the directions i need.  Tell me what happened.   on my knees to give you my love and devotion.    XOXOXOXO   sissy phyll

Comment by melissa on 02/19/04
I loved this and especially went out and bought a pair of nylons just to please master. I am looking to serve a master or mistress and if you know anyone who needs a sissy like me, please let them contact me.

love and kisses

m xxx

Comment by tara on 08/11/03
I usually hate to bash a story, especially one that took as long as this one might have to write, but I gotta agree with Annie here.

I don't want to go on a rant here, but the whole thing seemed like a desperate ploy by one of those annoying "trannie chasers" you run into on TG chat rooms, constantly begging for cybersex or phone chat, even after they are told that you have no interest in men.  Why on earth would you put in the title that straight men should read it!?

Contrary to stereotype, the majority of us who enjoy women's clothing are not interested in men.  We emulate femininity because we enjoy and appreciate it, not because we want to be objectified by boorish men.

True, there are plenty of gay men who also enjoy crossdressing as one of their kinks, and I'm sure several of them would enjoy corresponding with you.  It seems to me that you should have directed this "story" towards them...  Although I don't really think an erotic fiction site like this should be the forum for soliciting sex-based on-line chat.

Anyway, that's just my opionion, I could be wrong.

Comment by Annie Warren on 08/10/03
I hate to say it, but I did not read all of it. The opening turned me off and spot reading seemed to me to be the ramblings of a selfcentered, egotistical writter. It looked from what I read to be written more for the writer than the reader. I rarely read anything when the writer turns me off at the start and spot checking does not reclaim my interest... sorry. I usually do not comment, but this one begged for it as I saw it.

Comment by Scott on 08/08/03
My bad I forgot to post my email. Again great story   Comments below.  

Comment by Scott on 08/08/03
Master
I loved your story. Very different from the norm.  Oh and yes I followed all your instructions to the letter.

Comment by Ami Lamida on 08/08/03
That was different, and different is good.  I'm not big on the mumbo-jumbo hypnosis, but I DO love being given firm instructions.  If it had gone a bit longer, I would have had to hide behind my desk all day at work!  Keep up the good work.

Comment by Annalise on 08/08/03
Master
That was a really original little 'tale'. Lovely! Had me quite taken!



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