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Comment by Miss Fitt on 08/08/17
Will you please get those pronouns sorted. Comment by Mariah on 04/19/13 One element of Janet's stories that truly amazes me is the accepting and supportive parents, in real life it usually never works out that way so people like Jill and Kimberly get ostracized and destined to loneliness. Comment by Keischa on 09/19/11 Ho ho, who wuodla thunk it, right? Comment by Lorraine on 10/15/10 Janet, I love how you're never afraid to portray young crossdressers exploring their sexuality with other young men. In this story I liked how you had the mother show no disapproval at all when she walked into the living room to find the two sets of boys all kissing each other. Just as it's crucial that a mother accept her son's wish to wear dresses and lingerie, it's just as important for her to support her son as his desire to begin dating boys emerges. Comment by Rhiannon Sara Melton on 06/16/10 I love you so much for writing this! In reading some of the other comments some talk about grammar and to me they miss the point. I am still crying you are awesome. Comment by Geena on 01/09/10 I really loved this storty. To make it even better, it needs some serious editing and refinement, which will only make it so much better! Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/31/09 I cried enough over "POOR LITTLE GIRL" but I wept copious tears over this story and am still crying.Kim's address to her peers goes down ,in my book, as one of the great human rights statements in Comment by Diane on 08/23/09 Forget the pronouns and pay attention to the story; it has some very powerful lessons. Comment by d. mueller on 01/02/09 it is as if i were reading the essence of my early years. it really took a forceful turn at the end with the social and societal misunderstandings that many don't understand unless you are a kevin, and read it as a person in the first part, as it is your story also. i never got a "break" at the acceptance found by kimberly, but i teared up with the possibility of others accepting change as evolution, not ignorance. thank you for the story,(p.s. it also can can be non fiction- i know). . vty d. Comment by Alyssa on 08/04/08 I got to admit, even I struggled to makes sense of the whole story this time, but it was a good read. A heart wrenching tale of love and hope, of betrayal and distrust, and then all of that coming to a head when Jill comes into the school with a gun, very glad that everything worked out in the end there. I cried, and I hope that any other tanssexuals out there can eventually find the same acceptace, and work up the courage to admit it to those close to them, after all, if you can't be true to yourself, you really can't be true to anyone. Comment by Me on 03/17/08 The way the author throws her pronouns around, randomly switching among 1st, 2nd, and 3rd person forms, I don't know who she is talking about half the time. This makes for a frustrating read! :( Comment by jennifer on 01/09/08 i loved your story janet, i wish i had a parent who loved me when i was young like that, you brought out a great leader in jill, who is wise beyound her years, please keep up the good work!!!! Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/07/07 Great story Janet!! Kevin's anguish leads his Mom to help him become Kimberly. Jeff's admission of his desire starts an irresistable roller coaster of anguish for Jill leading Kim to be strong for both. Kim becomes a leader and finds true love as does Jill. One question though, does Jill have the operation too? Janet, I hoped you were never raped. Comment by sissykathy on 01/09/06 Dear Janet i just loved this story. i was especially drawn on how the mother undressed for her son. i was hoping you would describe more about how he had a high heel fetish and his mother accomodated him thanks again for the story sissykathy Comment by nicole on 04/26/05 a really good story which i just wish it could be me.thank you for this.love nicole Comment by lidya on 02/19/04 I LOVED THIS STORY DESPITE THE CONFUSION OF THE AUTHOR CHANGING FROM FIRST PERSON TO THIRD PERSON AND OCASSIONALLY REFFERING TO THE SAME PERSON AS HE AND SHE. Comment by DeeDee Clark on 02/12/03 No matter how many times I have read this story i cry. All the frustrations of want ing to dress like a girl, or a woman seem to come out in this story. |
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