Good story, well written with just a touch of humour and, for a change, properly edited. It was easy reading without continually having to stop to try to fathom out what the author had intended to say, I didn't even find a typo ! It's been a long time since the last episode, I hope you will continue soon ?

after part 4:

from part 1:  <<  To make life even more enjoyable, as a grown up, I also had two girl friends. They both knew about the other, but didn't object, because we had not entered into any formal agreements. With no agreements, either formal or otherwise, there seemed to be no obvious reason for me to say goodbye to either one of them. ... I had decided to keep both of these girl friends, because each had their own special appeal to me. Each one was able to fulfill different needs at the time. The first one, Carol, was quite reserved, quite pretty, and very careful to remain proper and lady like at all times. >>

What happened to/about Carol?  There is no mention of her after this through part 4, and he was apparantly, from what's written above, initially as close to her as to Daphne.  There is not even any mention of a breakup or conflict with her because he changed his mind about keeping both girlfriends.  I would have imagined Carol being a major source of conflict, especially after finding out about Robyn - which she eventually would, even if only as late as Halloween.

Just read the third part and liked the way it flowed towards a nice happy ending.  Makes a real nice change from most of the stores we read.

Thanks Tina xx

A sweet story, with interactions between the charaters subtly different from what I've seen elsewhere in this genre. I'm eager to see what you do with these two lovely people.
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--Pervy

This is shaping up to be a lovely story.  I love the illiteration and sensitivity of your style.  Hope to see more of this.

Robyn, love the first and second course of this meal for the mind and those of us whom have atleast a degree of life like you have written, waiting for the next installement, to see where the storie flows.Nice like it very much...
Michelle

Hi Robyn :)

A great start to a wonderful story, please continue.

Hugs,Fran

Very nice!  I loved the sensuous detail of the transition.  I can't wait fort part 2.  Will Daphne and Berniece run into Carol ??

great outfit descriptions  and you put joy into your story