That something would be a "spine." I would like to have seen Jerry display some anger and throw down his "gift" and storm out of the shop in a rage.

Agreed with some of the past comments. Jerry let’s himself get completely walked over. The author needs to write him to have at least something more.

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Also, in chapter 1, I would have told the wife to stop making excuses for Nancy.

Agreed with the lack of realistic anger. If I was Jerry, I would be giving a piece of my mind to all of the women. While a good writing, the author sacrificed the realistic emotions that Jerry would be feeling and expressing. Also, I agree with the comment about the wife. She forces Jerry to do one thing and complains when she experiences it.  These are the type of people you avoid in real life. If there is ever a third part, it would be interesting to see how Jerry gets back at the women.

Interesting that his wife said she didn’t like to be forced into something, but before, she said it was for his own good. Can’t have your cake and eat it too. In real life, he should seek a quick divorce.

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I love these stories. I keep coming back to them and rereading them. Please do more.

Wonderful stories.  Federal Law 142.23.2 mandates that you end the suspense and tell us of the revenge and the trip to England.
You have an amazing talent in writing.  Your ability to bring out emotions-love, anger,loyality is absolutely inspired.
Please let your fans know what happens next.

hi there loved the story love to read part 3 wish these storys were true wish it was me in that window!!!

Very good story. REALLY wish it would be completed. Thank you

lots of thought brilliant story when is the next part comming along well done fantastic

Great read!

Lots of well thought out detail, Thanks.

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Nicely worked story. A bit different in outlook to most. Part 3 would be great, if you felt like adding it after all this time...........

Anyway thanks for a good read!

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  Debbie

Loved your story, especially the end of part one.  Looking forward to more.

Thanks for two lovely stories which are full of a very detailed and sensuous feminine transformation.  I would just swoon to be able to be maniuplated in such a way!

PLEASE, PLEASE do write a third story to add to your repertoire!!!

And, this time, please do add some sex.  Either of the lesbian variety (Suzy and Nancy), the garden variety married kind (Jerry and Suzy as two women), or a threesome.  

I am only sorry that I discovered your stories so late.

love,
Deniece Edwina Rose

Great Story. Did anyone notice that his corset was tightened on the "rack" so the dress would fit but the dress wasn't picked out until they were at the Bridal salon. I wonder if poor Jerry ever realized that. What would have been more fun was for Nancy to intercept Suzy on the way home and take her for coffee to tell her about the party. That way Jerry could have spent a couple of more hours tied up and in heels.

Well, it's been over a year and no part III.  I would have fired Nancy after the Halloween party.  Their lack of real anger after the fetish shop is somewhat unbelievable; that they would even consider taking them to England is totally unbelievable.  BUT, as I said, I would have fired Nancy after the Halloween party and there wouldn't have been any more story, so it's a good thing I'm not the author. :-)  

Your stories are fantastic, I can't wait for the next one.
If only things like that really happened, but then it wouldn't be fantasies.

Well done !!
I appreciate the direction and tone of the story .