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good story, well written,.. looking forward to more!;-),..

would like more

I have throughly enjoyed this story.  It has made me laugh and smile at a time when it's been a long time since I had done either.  At several points you have actually had me in hysterics and I can count on my fingers the number of times in my life that that has happened. So, my sincere compliments to you Miss Alicia M. Hart, for bringing joy back into my life.

In a more serious vein though, I am afraid that I must disagree with some of my fellow Commentators.  This story does NOT have too fast of a pace, quite the contrary the beat is EXACTLY right for this style (and no I don't mean genre).  The fast pace keeps you perked and interested, whereas others would slow you down with tiny to huge irrelevancies in the plot, details, and thoughts/emotions of the characters.  Whereas some would find it too "simple" and move on, or find it to be too fast and move on, I must say that the very "simplicity" of your story is what allows it to move at a faster rate of exchange than other stories and keeps it interesting.  So, keep up the rate with this kind of "simple" style and you will have a recipe for a successful narrative each time.

I do, however, agree with the portion of Commentators who say not to add more humiliation and bondage scenes.  I have to admit that it's quite true that to find a story in this genre without all the bondage and humiliation is quite rare and, in my own opinion refreshing.

Now, I think I've lectured you all to death with my talk and thoughts.  
So signing off now, with LARGE hopes of continuation of the story,
         Alejandro Quixote (no relation to the Don :)

P.S.

No offense was meant to be given in any way, shape, form, or fashion. If any was taken then all I have to say is to ask your pardon for a stuffy, crotchety, and generally lonely literature man.

I have throughly enjoyed this story.  It has made me laugh and smile at a time when it's been a long time since I had done either.  At several points you have actually had me in hysterics and I can count on my fingers the number of times in my life that that has happened. So, my sincere compliments to you Miss Alicia M. Hart, for bringing joy back into my life.

In a more serious vein though, I am afraid that I must disagree with some of my fellow Commentators.  This story does NOT have to fast a pace, quite the contrary the beat is EXACTLY right for this style (and no I don't mean genre).  The fast pace keeps you perked and interested, whereas others would slow you down with tiny to huge irrelevancies in the plot, details, and thoughts/emotions of the characters.  Whereas some would find it too "simple" and move on, or find it to be too fast and move on, I must say that the very "simplicity" of your story is what allows it to move at a faster rate of exchange than other stories.  So, keep up the rate with this kind of "simple" style and you will have a recipe for a successful narrative each time.

I do, however, agree with the portion of Commentators who say not to add more humiliation and bondage scenes.  I have to admit that it's quite true that to find a story in this genre without all the bondage and humiliation is quite rare and, in my own opinion refreshing.

Now, I think I've lectured you all to death with my talk and thoughts.  
So signing off now, with LARGE hopes of continuation of the story,
         Alejandro Quixote (no relation to the Don :)

P.S.

No offense was meant to be given in any way, shape, form, or fashion. If any was taken then all I have to say is to ask your pardon for a stuffy, crotchety, and generally lonely literature man.

Wouldn't allens manlyhood be seen through his swim suit?

Sweet story Alicia. We want more.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Very sweet. I hope we get to see more

i really like this story and cant wait to read more. i wish you all the best.

,Jessica

It's just a nice story.I liked it.but the goverment should read all of these stories.they could take all of the ax murders or worst and put them in a dress for a week then at the end be married to the warden it would solve at least two problems.

looking forward to the continuation of this one - - mmmmmm

your story was excellent. it excelled on many levels. defiantly the best ive heard in months! more chapters would be greatly appreciated.
love one of your biggest fans

I enjoyed this story very much. Keep up the good work, doll. Maybe have Mom send Allison to an all Girl's school... she becomes a Majorette or cheerleader or something!

You better continue this one for sure! It may be simple in its way but I found it very nice and refreshing.

                    Vivien

I enjoyed your story, I do love it when I find a story that isn't all about bondage and the associated stuff that goes with it. Just a sweet, story of how a boy learns what it means to be a girl.
Please do more chapters. Hugs, Janice

very good story revenge is sweet

Great Story.

nice,sweet and not horribly descusting, i like it! keep up the good writing

a great beginingto a good story allen will learn a lesson never to be forgotten i would like to see some rebellion in the next part by allen and then being disaplined and punished a bitmore servere maybe introduce some bondage or hormones unknowinly ad ministerd by emma getting jealous things like that but a great story so far

very good story line but alittle more description on clothes and feelings would help.  i did like it altho thoughts from the mother and other daughter about how to humiliate "her" would help.  continue the work.


julie

ps: if you e-mail me be sure to put "sissy stories" in the title

I just wanted to know why the pics depicted him too look exactly like a girl otherwise the story was great.

I fell in love with this story, and the artwork as small as it is , is great Please continue this story

I loved this story. It is very warm. The casual, matter of fact,  acceptance of Allison by mom and sis is very loving.
Keep up the good work.
Arlene

I really loved this story and like where it was going but it seems like it's been awhile and you haven't even done anything to continue the story is it that you need help if so I'm sure there are some people that are will to work with you on this story!

A good story the illustrations were very good I was suprised that  allen wanted to stay a girl but I can understand it I look foreward to the next installment

Alicia, This was a very well written story. Short, sweet and to the point. This is the kind of romantic TG fiction that I like.

Barb

Great.  Wish I could have done that!  Carry on with Kevin please.....

I love the story! It is a very common happening. Much the same as my own, though it is happening a bit smoother and a lot faster than my own experience. I believe mummy and sis would accept, and help, a bit more reluctantly though. Kevin is so sweet, but I think came around a bit too quickly. Thank you for leaving out the humiliation and beauty parlor scenes that seem so repetitive in such stories.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see more.

PS. Do a spelchek before posting. It helps.

Very nice story - maybe another trip to the mall but spare us the humiliation scenes - I think its gone too far for that! Spellchecking would be good.

Very nice story. Another trip to the mall with perhaps some humiliation?

I LOVE YOUR STORY. I HOPE YOU WRITE SOME MORE.

Great story..........nice illustrations...Too Fast ?? My Mom and Sis accepted alot faster than that...Though it was awhile before I went to the Mall..

Fine treatment of a classic theme.  Adorable illustrations add so very much to the story.  We're ready for more.

Lovely illustrations! Storyline is also a good classical model - but with this tempo Allison will be a full grown woman in the next part (perhaps some more shopping and more descriptions of her feelings & cloths - maybe even going to school would help).

But do continue!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

I like the story, and especially the illustrations.  However, everything is happening WAY too fast and the mother and sister's acceptance of it is way to smooth to be normal.  I sense some trickery on their part - chemicals, hypnosiis, etc. - to make Allen Allison permanently.  I'd like to see some resistance on his part and some force on theirs.  A twist would be for Kevin to help his guy friend Allen against the women when he finds out what's going on.  I would like to see a good beauty/hair salon scene, maybe with illustrations of Allison in curlers.  Maybe they trick him by letting him dress as Allen but then humiliating him by making him have his hair/makeup done while dressed that way.
  Jezzi

I am always a proponent of illustrated stories, and this is a very nice one. The drawings are a bit small, but do not detract from any enjoyment of the story or of the drawings themselves.

Keep up the nice work, Alicia!  (^_^)