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All Pretense Aside
by Diane

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Comment by Jennie on 02/09/10
You've written several excellent starts to stories but never seem to develop them further, a real shame since those I've read beg for more story line to follow.  Additions to the existing stories would be very welcome!

Comment by Alison mary on 08/02/09
A lovely story----You should write more.God bless

Comment by juliej on 06/02/04
well written interesting to read but a bit fast goining straight into the story with a backround which was intresting having an understanding mother was very good

Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/13/02
A very well told and written story. I totally enjoyed it and hope to read a few of your other stories.

I liked the way this boy who had no friends living near him found a way to be content with himself and in the end with his sisters and such.

Diane

Comment by Nellie D on 03/02/01
The second part is as good as the first.

Comment by Miranda Logan on 02/20/01
This was a great story but when is it going to be finished ?

Comment by Nellie D on 12/26/00
An interesting start to what seems a nice story.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/26/00
Truely a heart felt story.



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