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Altered Fates: The Husband
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Juno Reeves on 06/10/03
Another great story by Ellie Dauber, as usual. Even though AF:The Husband can stand alone, there are just enough hints about what may come to stir my curiosity for the sequel, AF: The Wife.

Comment by Paula on 06/03/03
Look forward to ALTERED FATES THE WIFE to appear more than just by name in WHAT NEW section of Crystal. Hope the wife gets her for what she did to the  husband.

Comment by Paula on 06/03/03
not bad but the guy wasn't the type who really deserved the fate.

Comment by Poncho on 06/03/03
Not bad, but I seem to recall that the medallion has it's own sense of justice. It was always fun to see someone get what was coming to him in the old stories, and your story would benefit from some disciplanary action on the two wrong-doers by the medallion.




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