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Altered Fates: The Wife
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Comment by A reader on 06/04/03
Excellent excellent stories - I like this more than "The Wife," and I also thought that was a good story. In general, I think the 'Altered Fates' Medallion is kind of a silly concept to make a series of stories around. However, in these stories, the subterfuge worked well with the ability to switch places, the 12 hour limits, and the ability to alter people's bodies - maybe the most interesting use of the Medallion I've read. I only wish it was raunchier - most of the sex was husband/wife, and people were turned more into servants, than into sexual play-things, despite the threats going around. |
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