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Alternate Players
by Slothrop

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Comment by hippie cheerleader on 12/30/06
Congratulations on a great story!
I'm a music journalist and would love to hear the companion CD. (I know there will probably never be one, but... one can always dream...)
Will there be more adventures for Jenny and Bobby?
I definitely prefer stories where the hero/heroines retain all or most of their original identities. None of the main characters in this story  were humiliated, degraded, or corrupted. I appreciate that.
Science fiction, comedy, adventure, music, and great characters!
Who could ask for more? Eagerly waiting your next work.
Best wishes for the new year.
Peace-- hippie cheerleader.

Comment by Prudence Walker on 12/29/06
Great job as usual ty. i just hope there will be a chapter two. just as well i have extra cushions, otherwise sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more, could get painful. hugs friend

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 12/28/06
If you like action.  If you like a real story with your daily reading.  If you believe that a story isn't worth reading unless it makes you think, then you HAVE to read this one.  Ty has done it again.  This is a combination of a real story, with fantasy thrown in just to keep your prurient interests from flagging.  Ty's word mastery(mistressry?) leads you down a path of seeming deception, more angst than you can shake a keyboard at, and humor that'll tickle your funnybone big time.

Ty?  I loved it even if it wasn't my normal cup of tea.  Another great job, my friend.  Happy New Year and huggles from,
Cathy_t_




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