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Amazon: Regenesis
by Itinerant

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Comment by me suba on 12/20/18
r9JNXf paragraph is actually a good post, keep it up.

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14
KQHn7S Major thanks for the article.Much thanks again. Awesome.

Comment by gwenellen (Gwen Brown) on 08/15/07
I am lying in this hospital bed and ths story is a mahvelos distraction

Comment by Paula Mortenson on 05/11/07
I congratulate you on what is obviously going to be an epic work. Well written, ranging over well described characters. I normally avoid Age Regression and the like but this story has held me from the beginning and I have now read the 14 chapters posted to date. There may be the errors and the repeats mentioned by other commentators BUT to get any real feel for an epic such as this you have to keep the reading moving forwards apace. I particularly get irritated when reading a story by a liberal sprinkling of spelling and grammatical errors (allowing for the differences between the two sides of the Atlantic) and there are few (if any) of those. The description of the characters and the development of their personalities is a joy.  

An enjoyable read that has moved me to comment and offer congratulations to the author.

Thank you

Paula


Comment by Anita on 02/10/07
Back again (lol).  And now that I have read part 5, I believe I see what happened.  The story was originally written in the order of part 1, part 4, and part 5.  But somewhere along the way, part 4 and 5 were further developed into parts 2 and 3.

Now that you have posted parts 1, 2, and 3 (your most recent finished copy), somehow you then included parts 4 and 5 (which appear to have been the "roughs").

I hope that my muddled attempt to explain makes sense to you.  Bottom line is that part 4 and 5 are repeats of passages that you already have in the story.  Parts 4 and 5 should be removed and I dearly hope that you will find the time to continue the story from where you ended it (at the conclusion of part 3).  I really am enjoying what I've already read and eagerly await a continuation of the story.


Comment by Anita on 02/10/07
Story is easy reading and is quite enjoyable.  I have completed reading parts 1, 2, and 3.  But now as I begin reading part 4, I realize that "this" part 4 is in truth a repeat of an earlier part of the story.  Did the "actual" part 4 (or the intended part 4) get mislaid?

Comment by Diane Castle on 10/14/05
I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this saga.  I've been reading it on other sites, but this is the only site that seems to actually ensure that authors get their fanmail, so I decided to write to you here.

I'm enjoying the complexity of the story.  It seems like you're going to be writing episodes for the next decade, given your own timeline for the Amazons.  If so, I eagerly await the next 4,727 or so installments.  :-)  :-)  I'm enjoying the slow development of the characters, and I'm looking to the introduction of more Amazons.

Keep up the good work,
Diane



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