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Ambassador's Second Maid
by Monica Graz

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Comment by Connie A Ginghams on 07/22/10
What a lovely story.
I see that there is still hope for me.Living in Belgium I always thought that it is not that common in Belgium.
This story gives me a lot of hopes that one day I will find my true misstres.
By the way I also loved all your other story's listed here. Especially maid for a week. This is the best story I've ever read about male maids.
Hoping to start my maid career soon.

Thanks for sharing these very nice phantasies.

XXX Connie.


Comment by B. Smythe on 03/09/09
I agree with Kristi (above) You write well and as if you have worked as a maid in the 50's when unifoms were worn by maids, even if they worked in modest homes.  We hired live-in high school and college students, trading board and room for 20 hrs per week and at the going wage for hours above that.  As  a result we helped many girls be able to go to college or community college because board and room represented the greatest expense of going to college if they did not live in town.  Establishing clear rules and job description was an im;portant part of the success of our experience. Let's have part II of the Ambassador's Second Maid.

Comment by maid ana on 08/18/04
Please Monica, I wish to read more of this beautiful story.
All your stories are very good and I love to read all you write.

Thank's very much.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/05/04
Dear Monica:

   Considering this is not my usual forte' or area of reading this is fantastic. I hope it doesn't get too brutal, but yet again it is your story. The anticipation and excitement is almost overwhelming. Poor Jenny is going to simply burst at the seams. I like your enthusiasm and surprisingly I like your story very much.

   The realism is due to the fact, I think, that you have served as a maid, Monica.  It is always good to write about what we know. Also it seems appropriate that this woman be so stern and demanding in her position of power. Probably a right bitch, but certainly useful as a politician's wife. Maybe I should say no-nonsense to the ultimate degree.

   Very good start.  Highly recomended by me.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/04/04
Loved it



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