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Amphetamine
by Solon Plorry

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Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 03/29/03
I am consfused. We found out in the story that Lisa's real name was Larry, but most of the story centered around others. This was very poorly wriiten and seemed to jump from scen to scen without reverence. I'm sorry, Solon, but as an author, and I may not write that good, but at least I follow the storyline, without jumping from scene to scene, like here, in this story. The reason I kept reading was, I had hoped there was going to be some semblance of order. Not your best work.

Barbara Lynn Terry













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