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Andersonville 14 -- The Mailman
by Kelly Davidson

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Comment by Cathy_t_ on 11/21/01
Kelly.  Just to put my comments to you about your stories and Andersonville on the record for all to see:  You've taken an idea that I didn't like, and made me LIKE IT!  While I respect the Professor's writing ability, Ovid always left me a bit cold.  Andersonville, on the other hand has me on the edge of my seat, wondering what'll happen next!  I PARTICULARLY like the idea of people being able to REMEMBER their former lives, even though they're being more or less forced into accepting their new lives.  Let the nay-sayers and critics who contribute nothing, moulder in their seats, Kelly.  Pay NO attention to the whiners and complainers who know NOTHING and have nothing to offer.  Keep on writing for as long as you WANT to and write  whatever you WANT to.  Your friends will always be here for ya.  Promise!
                               Cathy_t_ said that

Comment by Amber Chalise on 11/17/01
I really like how you reinforce the fact that dennis butz doesn't crap and can do things on his own. Even better how he doesn't let his pridge get in the way and take help. The story had a good vibe and made the reader think the mailmans true intentions. Great way to give us more insight into the war. Just a shame it will be a while before we find out when real peace and the aftermath happens.

Comment by Nellie D on 11/16/01
A fine piece of fiction with a human getting one up on the gods. The plot line has a man placing TG people into Peace River. His methods and reason are explored. But is his 'good deed' really good or does he have a hidden agenda? Read it and find out.



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