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while I like chapter 5 the best, and I also know that while he deserved a good chunk of what happened, I think that being happy that he was a prostitute was a bit forced. I sort of think that Jeri should have been a bit bitter with her sister, or maybe resentful.

I think chaptor5 was Misty's best work that I have seen so far. She does appear to really have captured the emotion within this beyond what has been seen before.The ability of a author to have the reader really feel and experience the situation is a very commendable trait.

OK. Lets get the bad bits out of the way. first.i didnt understand what happened the cherlys brother in the months from december to march .after jerry fell on the fence. did he just evaporate? lol. did his sister not bother to find out what happened? there was no mention of him in the rest of the story. second. when andrew/andrea was dressing for frank i got a little confused with the personal pronouns he/she andrew/andrea. a little consistancy would be helpful and easier to understand. (it is one of the hardest things to get right, believe me i know and have fallen into the same trap) i wasnt keen on the way frank had andrea kneel and suck his cock reminisant of jerrys same demand. i would have felt some reluctance would have shown up as her memories of that event came back. frank did seem more demanding in that part than being loving and gentle.(just my opinion) ok thats it. now i like the story generally, it has potential. will andrea become a witch? now that has possibilities. i liked the story even with those few grumbles. your a new writer and still learning. and you will get better. dont be discouraged from any negative comments, but learn where you can improve more. huggles hon. see you in the chatroom. lol

I loved the Sharla stories, despite lack of significant TG material, I had been hoping to see more of the fun magic used by Sharla on Andrew. I'm still curious about the magic wars that you left up in the air.

Like Jezzi, I felt that allowing the rape to be carried to completion in part 3 was too much. And in part 4 I was devastated to see that Frank was little better in his sexual approach. What happened to old-fashioned romance and real love?

After a really great and refreshingly different start, I'm rather let down and disappointed.

Frilliette

I really DID NOT like part III.  the whole submissive cocksucking/rape thing was so foreign to the rest of the Winslow series.  I hope this degeneration of a sweet, happy, refreshingly different, entertaining series into a typical kinky sexual fantasy DOES NOT continue.  AndREW certainly did not deserve what was happening to him.  
Before Part 3:  Why wouldn't Mary accept him as a boy even when he told her point blank that he was one, and why did he accept it so calmly?  This was way before he opened Sharla's box.  Was/is Sylvia magic and unaware of it?

hmm i liked it till the end, rape is such and ugly and sordid thing no matter who is being raped. i was hoping for a last minute reprieve in the form of frank. i hope jerry gets his just deserts.