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Did anyone ever teach you about grammar? Based ten the readability of your story, I'd say 'NO.'

Now for the content: Why that He!! did Andy's aunt have to go to the extreme she did. It is apparent she hates men. How do Andy's parents react when they discover his castration, simply because of his aunt's inability to handle disobedient children in a civil manor.

I assure you that if I discovered my sister or sister-in-law did that to my son, I'd get the details from my child before reporting her to everyone - oh, the power of the Internet. True justice, if delivered, would allow the aunt, and her cohorts, to have the honor of being operated on. There's no way to predict what may get sliced, diced, or removed, but it would be done in a filthy environment with rusty tools and  no anesthetic administered beforehand. Each one would be a witness to their own, and each other's, punishment.  They will regret it for the rest of their lives.

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After i read Andy to Angela I tried to find the follow up to your story, but had no luck. If I were to do a follow up to this story I would have Andrew find a way to transform his aunts and his mother into what they most hate that which is into men just to get even. Plus I would turn his cousin John into a true girl and his female cousins into men as well

I was wondering what happens next. I'm looking forward to reading the conclusion.

I just reread this. I add what I think a much more likely outcome.

<<  Aunt Rose finally stood up from her stool and asked aunt Mary to undo the strapping from me while she went and threw her surgery gloves in the bin. When I was unstrapped I was allowed to sit up very slowly. My paper gown covering my thighs aunt Mary unfastened the back and slipped it forward off my arms. I looked down between my legs and all I could see was a flat piece of bandage with two elastic sticky plasters holding the bandage on. ‘W…W…What have you done to me’ I cried.  >>

I looked around desperately for a way out ... and I saw one. The scalpel Aunt Rose had used was lying on a tray by the bowl that had held what they cut out of me. Quickly I grabbed my salvation and, saying a quick prayer for forgiveness to God, I punged it into my chest. As things started to go black, I heard screaming. With my last breath (I thought) I whispered, "You hate me; now you are rid of me."

one of the things about really good writing is it becomes more than a good story, it is able to make you or me feel what the characters feel. Therefore we hurt when that boy was hurting and we identify with him or her.
It upset me but the thing is, that is why this was a good story.

an intensce story hard work reading a bit more fight back would have been better but overall a good story

An exceedingly good and intense story if one overlooks the grammar and spelling and I will forgive that difficulty since there is not one story I know of on the site, that has not got spelling or grammatical errors (MS Word would correct most of it, where the word is basically correct but not in all the cases). It is a pity that some people get a little 'precious' if it is not their 'scene', instead of having an open mind and understanding that it is only a make believe story, where one does not have to delve too deeply into understanding the detail. It was written some time ago, but it would be nice to think that there would be a sequel to finish it off.

I just re-read this.  What a horror story!!!  

Julia, your descriptions of feminizing are very well written, and as a CD myself, I would love to experience them.  However, the forcing of femininity negates the pleasure of it.   Any enjoyment I got out of the salon descriptions was cancelled at my anger at them being forced on a blameless unwilling child whose only crime was being male.

The women you write, with the possible exception of Allison, are despicable evil selfish immoral child abusers.  .  As you write they say below, they are not concerned with what is best for him, only for their own convieience and pleasure.  they don't really give a damn about him and were quite willing to destroy him.

<<  now you can live your life AS WE ALL WANT YOU TO’ ... ’We have completely destroyed your old life,  >>  

When you write ...

<<  If you would like to know what Angela’s future holds ‘the wedding day and operation and the punishments to make him complete e-mail Julia_thom@hotmail.com  >>

... I can pretty much guess what "Angela's" future holds.   By the way in which they have introduced Andy to femininity, they have made it pretty certain that he will never truly enjoy it.  At best they will get what you write they are getting, sullenness or pretend enjoyment based on fear.  If the aunties hoped to get a happy niece with whom they could have a pleasant aunt-niece relationship, I think they will be disappointed - Wait till Angie is a teenager full of hatred/fear of all women and her aunts and cousins in particular, full of self  loathing for allowing herself to be transformed into that which HE hates.  I only hope that when he does commit suicide, he takes them all with him.  The other option is Stockholm syndrome where he beomes a pitiful submissive fawning creature desperately seeking the approval of his torturers, never able to act as an adult and realize his full potential as a human being.  

first off, why is the aunt doing this, second, why dosnt andy run out the door to the police, and why are all these lesbians so willing to rape a little girl? i dont think the sex was too realistic.also, where is the parents and why was he just givin to the aunt. what about school? it starts out summer vacation, but no tell of school after the years go by, just endless paragraphs in a hair salon. i liked the story, it just needs more, and also needs to be a bit more realistic. come on, i mean he goes in for a bikini wax and some girl pulls out a vibrator minutes later? does she just keep it on her? who does that?who just says oh im gonna stick this vibrator in youre ass now and have this lesbian expiriance with a minor,thats called molestation, and i dont think it happens like that and so frequent.a salon run by a bunch on pedo-dykes? and just so happens the aunt goes there, and is a freak too? and the daughter is a horny bi pedo as well? too much going on. and the guy friend just so happens to be gay,all of a sudden.it would be belivable if it was  maybey just the daughter  making them do it, that stuff happens, but the salon run by a bunch of horny pedo dykes, not buyin it.and on the wedding day,in front of everyone, that one lady just puts her hand up in his panties and starts to play with his nub? thats not to realistic. im just sayin, i was liking the story alot, and thought it would actually make a good movie, if it had more facts on whats goin on, and less unrealistic porn type plots goin on.

excellent story  very good case of enforced domination again 10/10
look forward to more stories excellent

I reread this story & tried to get further into it, but
coercion of any kind gives me problems.  So I may have missed
something, but still I wonder...where were his parents all this
time?  And what do they do when they come home to hear their
son's tale of sustained verbal & physical abuse, & what is their
response when they find him castrated?  I can imagine lawsuits
at the least & probably criminal prosecution.  I think this
should be followed up.

Pervy

The concept is great but the execution is in need of work.  There are several tutorials available to help with this and you should have a spell checker somewhere in your program. The basic flaw is a reason, of any kind, why auntie is doing this to him. Is she perverted completely or is there another point being made that is escaping me.  It has good potential.  Work on it and shorten those paragraphs

He should have fought back.  I can't believe with everything he went through he didn't reach that "Freedom's just another word for nothin' left to lose." point and do something like stab Gwen or aunt mary with scissors and then try to commit suicide or get away by holding Allison hostage. Or run away.  Also no motivation was given.  Why are these three women in a consiracy to destroy him; why does gwen hate him?  Also, if Aunt Rose is in on all this, why is Jake not feminized also?  Too many questions.

I hate to say it, but I agree with Elaine.  I've read about a
third of it so far, and the formatting and punctuation leave a
great deal to be desired.  Believe me, these things matter, and
not just in Gr-r-reat Literature.  Read Stephen King's book
about writing if you don't believe me.

It's a pity, because it's shaping up to be a terrific yarn for
anyone who enjoys forced fem stories, and I looked forward to
seeing Andy put through the wringer.

Pervy

Hi
First to make a comment but it's not good I am afraid. The story doesnt hang together very well, it has poor punctuation, spelling and poor structure. Huge long paragraphs. It really ought to be given to someone to look at and then I am sure it will be a winner.

The story just seems to be one of debasement for andy with no real reason given why. That he's in store for more is tough on the the little guy. Maybe you can give us the reason why his aunt is such a bitch