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An Eight Year Old's Halloween
by Marnie Smith

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Comment by Missy Susan Pauline on 01/16/11
Dear Miss Marnie,

Another nice story. You have always offered your key character an option, "out." It's the caring and concern that your characters have, makes this a nice story.

You haven't written for a while, I hope you'll be able to write again.

"Missy," Susan.


Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 11/03/09
Hi Marnie.
He wanted to dress as a girl, he wasn't forced to do this.
That is a good story, I liked and I always say that nothing forced is good, but when a boy or a girl want, that's ok!
Kisses.

Comment by Julie on 07/29/05
Well written, and a nice start.  Perhaps it could have used just a little more detail ... like when he first saw his friend dressed as a girl.



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