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Angela's New Girlfriend
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Comment by patty on 04/08/10
I hope that you continue this story line with a complete transformation with some added spice Comment by Shirley on 02/21/09 Great story, Comment by Mandee on 02/01/08 It has been a few years since you wrote this saga. I hope you are still in good health and some day will come back to it to finish it. If not- thank you for writing it as you did and we will let our imaqinations take us in the varied directions it will as to how the story will end. Comment by Tiffany on 05/12/07 awesome can't wait for more please come back and write more! Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/15/07 I've come to this story late and love what I have read... if only my wife of 20+ years would get this participation going! I'm longing to read more....especially about the transformation of Laura's hair! PLEASE write more! Comment by julie j on 08/23/04 this is a great start to a story that can go with many twists & turns excellent work so far when will part 3 be ready ? i look forewards to this. Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 12/17/03 Laura, this is a lovely start of a wonderful story so far. I sincerely hope that you plan on continuing this. It would be exceedingly unfair to your fan's to leave us hanging (as some other authors seem prone to do). Comment by Kitt on 07/29/03 Laura Comment by Nellie D on 07/26/03 The second part was as good as the first. I hope Laura doesn't keep us waiting too long for the next part. Please keep up the good work. Comment by cassandra on 07/25/03 I'm so totally loving this lovely story, I'm screaming for parts 3 and more until the end is reached. Laura is such a fortunate lady having a supportive wife and girl friend. Comment by Carolyn Renee on 06/06/03 Lovely & sweet story. I am very jealous! Please continue immediately! Love Carolyn Comment by Julie Shaw on 06/01/03 I add my voice to those who feel it's a great part one that is just SCREAMING out for part 2 and possibly 3! Good set up, great character intros - now let's roll with it!! Comment by Nellie D on 06/01/03 The start to what could be a very interesting story. I hope this one doesn't turn on the main character and become nasty. It just begs for the next chapter. One flaw stuck out like the proverbial sore thumb, calling Angela Alexandra at the end. Comment by Gizelle on 06/01/03 I feel the same as Jezzi. This seems to be a great start to a story, please finish it, thank you. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/01/03 That's it!? Hopefully that was only part one. you get us all psyched for a really good detailed transformation story in a spa and then stop!? arrrrrgh! Comment by Paula on 06/01/03 Sweet story. |
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