Very bad story!
He isn't a man. A real man wouldn't let his wife turn him into a
maid.
Sorry, but this is what I think about this type of men!
Silvia.

Dear Margaret Jeanette,

Another beautiful, well-written, "feel good," story. This is the third of yours, that I've read tonight. I work the closing shift. It was, "ages," since I've been, "on," Storysite, now I've entered it each day for the last three days. I, "love," your style of using love as the basis for your endings.

On a side-note: I've been looking for padlock ankle-strap heels for quite some time. No one makes them in wide width and only four-inch heels. I'm only an 8 and a half WIDE.

Sisterly yours,

Ms. Susan Pauline Bauer

a sweet story impressed the way mike got used to it then turned it round into a thriving buisness intresting the way he done it well done

I like your plot and your characters.  Your story telling might use a little fleshing out to keep the story from becoming too simplistic.  This is a good quick read, I will have to find some other postings you have made as I will probably enjoy them too. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Cute story