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Comment by suba analuba on 08/12/18
NVNAFm Speed Corner motoryzacja, motogry, motosport. LEMGallery Comment by link building on 07/18/14 E1x9YN Say, you got a nice article post.Really thank you! Want more. Comment by Sam on 01/28/14 great story,i read every part of it..really enjoyed it Comment by take a look at it! on 10/25/13 h0SeKo Thanks-a-mundo for the article.Much thanks again. Cool. Comment by link building on 09/06/13 t57Guo Im thankful for the article post.Much thanks again. Great. Comment by Jhaicel on 01/06/13 Jeremy!!!!! Wow, what can I say? We absolutely and weeahhelrtodly adore every single second of the trailer, I've probably watched it a dozen times in the last few minutes. You are a master at what you do and every bride that has the chance of having you document their day is a lucky lucky girl!!! We feel so utterly and profoundly blessed to have your amazing talents documenting our day and have this work of art for posterity! I am speechless!!!! Thank you for all you do, you are truly spectacular!!! Comment by ashley on 04/16/12 part 2 was really nicely done. Comment by ashley on 04/14/12 very nice story. Looking forward to the rest of it. Comment by oem software on 02/11/12 aGfTSP Cool! You have answered. I'll take a quote! The meaning of life and everything else. Decided. No kidding!.... Comment by Silvia. on 09/15/10 This is a bad, horrible, terrible, disgusting story I read. Comment by Sharon on 05/27/10 What a beaitiful story,I loved older women when i was young.They Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/15/08 I REALLY LIKED THE STORY AND THOUGHT THAT HE DID GET THE GIRL EVEN THOUGH HE WAS ALSO DRESSED AS A GIRL, I THINK THE CHARACTERS OF THIS FICTIONAL STORY BECKY AND ANABEL SHOULD HAVE CHILDREN FIRST THEN HE SHOULD GO FOR THE OPERATION AND THEY SHOULD LIVE AS LIFE MATES BRINGING UP THEIR CHILDREN FOR EVER A SAMPLE IDEA,AS BECKY ROLLS OVER IN THE BED SHE SEES ANABEL NOW A FULL WOMEN AND HEARS THE BABY CRY AND NOW KNOWS THAT SHE GOT THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS FIRST IAN GOT HER PREGNANT THEN SHE GETS WHAT BOTH OF THEM WANT, IAN REALLY BECOMES ANABEL AND BECKY GETS A LIFE MATE WHO SHE CAN TELL ANYTHING TO. THEN ANABEL ROLLS OVER AND SMILES AND GOES INTO FEED THE TWINS WITH BECKY. Comment by Cynthia on 04/26/06 Nice and beautiful story! Soo easy too read! Had to read all of it without a break! Thank you soo much! Comment by Kelli Tyler on 11/19/04 Thank you Annabel, for the truely wonderful story! This mirrors very much the dream I have of becoming a woman. I will treasure this, dear, thank you! Comment by LYN on 08/19/04 GREAT STORY. Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/15/04 Loved it great story Comment by Pippa K. on 07/05/04 Minor quibble, but there's really no excuse for it: Your description of female anatomy is seriously screwed up. Please go find yourself a few pictures and descriptions. In the future, try to use terms like clit and g-spot correctly. Learn where each of these is. And, you might as well learn the other parts of the female "flower" while you're at it. Comment by Pam on 07/05/04 Wow, that was sure a Great Party and She is starting to become such Comment by Marie-Anne on 07/05/04 I have the possibility of being a maid/cleaning lady for a friend about once a month. No sex just hard work in real clothes, T-shirt and leggings for the heavy work and difficult cleaning jobs and then a blouse and skirt for ironing and tidying up before preparing tea at 4pm for Madame. Comment by Petula- Ladies Maid on 06/12/04 a lovely soothing story. It can happen something like this although it is rare and takes a long time. I am very lucky to have a wife who participates in this particular fantasy and although time is precious, due to children, we have some great fun playing out this type of scenario. Comment by Diane on 06/01/04 I have searched and searched for a woman like this, but don't believe there are any out there! Please keep up the good work, I love the story. Comment by Pam on 05/30/04 This is my dreams giggle giggle Yes!!!!! Comment by TiffFox on 05/30/04 Excellent story, nice to see a relationship rather than a subjugation (of course I'm not into part 2 that far yet) Comment by Jane Hudson on 05/30/04 Loved it Comment by Belinda on 05/29/04 What a nice scenario! Nicely paced, well written and not too complicated. If this is your first then congratulations. Good effort. I'll be looking out for the sequel. Comment by Pauline on 05/29/04 Annabel, you are so fortunate to have found a kind but dominating mistress. I know there is more to come |
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