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Annie's Birthday
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Comment by pron best on 05/13/17
s8JZpz sharing. my web page english bulldog puppies Comment by Davina on 01/22/13 A lovely story beautifully written, although I do tend to agree with Jezzi Steven's suggestion that if the genders were reversed there could have been legal action. Comment by Bev on 07/09/12 RobGreat shots  love the light on the couple in the chucrh and really love the moment that you captured during the speech  the bride looks as though she is about to burst!  Great emotion all the way through and such a happy, smiley couple! Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12 Disgusting, horrible, ridiculous, sickly,revolting,etc... Comment by speedy on 03/21/12 Sarha love your writing. Story line is good, as always. Character development is outsanding. You draw a pitchure, with words, good enuogh for my imagination to the rest. Thank You Comment by Jo-Anne on 12/20/09 Also a 2nd read, and I agree with Jezzi. It's well written, as is usual for Sarah, but it's unadulterated cruelty and bullying of a weaker individual into submission. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/27/09 I just reread this and the comments. I can't believe the positive comments about what those female bullies did to Stuart, who did absolutely nothing to deserve such treatmant. I repeat my earlier comment, Think if the situation was reversed and a group of boys did the same things to a younger girl. Talk about a double standard here! Mean girls, VERY mean girls, particularly Annie, who is taking out her disgust with herself for liking a younger boy and revealing that liking to her friends on Stuart. The story is well written, as is usual for sarah, but it sure points out that bullies can be girls - and the comments indicate that most readers feel that girl bullying is OK. Comment by juliej on 03/02/08 2nd reading brilliant more please i wish that you would have explained it more bur a brilliant story it would have been great to for them to force hime dressed brilliant more please Comment by juliej on 01/06/07 I would have loved to have been stuart a brilliant story i would like to have read how they got hold of him at first and whether he struggled or not also if another story like this is done ie for another of the girls birthdays it would be great for a better decription of the knickers 7clothing etc also how they managed to get him a brilliant story more please again i wish it was me that this happend to brilliant Comment by Impressed on 01/02/05 Wow. I have to say this is the greatest story on this site that I have ever read. Most other stories like this have are kind of easy to predict. In any case, keep up the good work! I'd love to read more stories of the same style Comment by Jill on 12/15/04 I would love to have been Stuart, there is not better way to make a boy feel good in female attire than to make him enjoy himself. Sally/Stuart liked his new atttire as he did not get naked. I htink this story could have a sequal with sally being made to date a boy on the boys birthday. Comment by julie j on 11/07/04 wonderfull story what a great way to have a birthday present i would have really enjoyed that to be forced by five girls and forcibly dressed great story more please well written & described right down to the colour of the panties they forced on him 2 pairs what a way to go Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/01/04 In regard to Lesley's comment (since she did not opt for e-mail): "all just harmless amusement for some wickedly dominant young ladies as far as I can see. " Comment by fregen on 08/18/04 Perhaps not the typical sweet and sentimental story but I hardly think Stuart will be traumatized by the incident. He likes the fact that Annie thinks he is 'a dish.' He considers Annie to be the best looking girl in the school. He's rather turned on by her attentions. Comment by Annabel on 08/05/04 Dear Sarah Comment by LESLEY on 08/05/04 Excellent story. Very well written and very sexy in places. The boy's embarassment and humiliation are depicted very well, as is the excitement of the girls at having him petticoated and at their mercy. I'm surprised at some of the readers' comments, all just harmless amusement for some wickedly dominant young ladies as far as I can see. I hope there will be follow-up in a similar vein, there is plenty of scope for one. Comment by Jimmy on 08/04/04 A bit of a disappointment. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/04/04 I have always wondered how the keywords "physically forced or blackmailed" and "sweet and sentimental" can be used together. Now I know; it was sweet and sentimental for Annie, certainly not for Stuart. WOW, what a bitch Annie turned out to be, and her friends too, to a person who had never done anything to deserve that kind of treatment. Another story that makes women look bad. I hope Stuart gets a chance to turn the tables on those amoral bitches. I guess after two EXCELLENT stories where the hero(ine) comes out a stronger person and doesa sort of turn the tables on "her" feminizers you felt the need to write a story where the females retain the upper hand. Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/04/04 Stu my boy are you in trouble now.Love this story Comment by jami on 08/04/04 Thank you Sarah, I enjoyed it. I could feel Stuart's humiliation and excitement, watching the girl he adores play with herself. It would seem that poor Stuart is trapped and will have to obey the girls. I am guessing there are no more chapters, so its fun to imagine what will happen next. Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 08/04/04 I did like the story. But sweet and sentimental? I would say not! Comment by Pippa K. on 08/04/04 I enjoyed the story. The weakest part, which I felt could have been the strongest part, was the "tossing off". A little more sensuous development, a blush here, a hesitance there, some shared heavy breathing, could have improved it immensely and dampened a good few panties. Comment by Tina on 08/04/04 Cute story! Loved the way you wrote about Stuart's feelings of confusion, helplessness, and guilty pleasure. Would perhaps have liked a bit more explanation as to why Annie got quite so excited while foisting her eyes on his knickers ~ was it a control thing or do the girls do this together? Maybe that will come in part 2. |
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