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Another Daughter for Shelly
by Saintly

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Comment by ravi on 05/08/14
nice story
Comment by Silvia. on 04/09/12
Good job.
Comment by speedy on 03/14/12
Your story shows the love and immagnation. I like the colors you paint with your words. Thank you for the work.
Comment by Maggie the Kitten on 01/28/04
Huggles and love to my twin toddler sis Baruchah

You have given us a story here wonderful in its own right and also the perfect sequal to Prue's The Dream.  It's written with great passion because it comes from the heart.  It comes alive because its the truth, a truth greater than the confines of the reality that most people accept.  

You shared your dreams, your fears, your pain, and ultimately your joy and homecoming.  I felt deeply the pain, frustration, and lonliness of the young man who didn't fit in his world or his body.  I felt the joy and the awe of the young innocent as she gradually accepted her new body, her new family and her new life.

It's not easy to bare your soul as such to the world, but in doing so you have given all of us a wonderful gift that is sure to touch the hearts of those who unwrap it.

Baruchah I loves you lots and lots and lots.  I tinks I is bout da luckiest liddle girl in da whole world cause cause I gots such a lovin famwee, and now I gots da best twin sister dat I could ever wishes for, and her can colors weal good too!

I loves you lots Baruchah, your sis Maggie
Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 01/27/04
Lovely! I am not really a fan of magical stories, but this one was so gentle and kind. Wish there was a chatroom like that...

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)
Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 01/27/04
I love this story!  It's nice to see little Maggie has finally got a little sister to pal around with.  And I so enjoyed Baru's shopping trip and her ride on the train.  It is always delightful to somehow recapture the innocence and wide-eyed wonderment of a child, and you have done so very nicely.


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