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Another Mission
by Jane Hudson

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Comment by Jill on 11/04/02
I remain your biggest fan.  Very clever the way you turn around stereotypes.  You have a very sweet way of show us what the world could be like.

By the way, many poeple think Bob Dylan can't sing.

Love

Jill

Comment by Diedre Miller on 11/02/02
Sentence structure, paragraphs, space bar, edit.....any of these terms mean anything to you?  This story is unreadable!!!  If you want folks to read what you write, learn to write the English language first.



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