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Another Visit to Mistress Ann
by Tim price

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Comment by diana douglas on 02/22/07
Nice but the diaper thing got a little old (but tht's the difference between your fantasies and mine...no biggy). You substitute 'to' for 'too' (as in 'too much'), might be worth looking into. Otherwise well told.

Comment by julie j on 01/17/05
an intresting story a lot of mistakes but the second part of this story ok not my scene i must admit



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