Oh dear another unfinished story, but to wax philosophic, it's pretty much like real life. Unfinished to the limit of our ever knowing. I would like to know how you would draw this to a point of closure. But it can be fun bringing it to a satisfying conclusion ourselves, each by our own lights. And it does appear that is our only course thus far.  But please accept our thanks for sharing your creation with us  *.*

Where a man let his wife feminize him? He kills her!
There's no way this happen!
Bad story.
Silvia.

I love stories about women who love to feminize men..and this is one of those> I read all chapters one through seven in one sitting ( minus a few minutes where  I had to clean up a little) and was in great anticipation of what will come next. For those of us who have been kissed by a man while enfemme  it was a pleasant side bar and for those of us who have  been dressed by a female significant other it rang true..now I need my hormone fix, natural breast growth and more than anything the first ever long awaited oral service to a very handsomne man   found for him by his female friends...loved the whole story and I see you wrote it a looooong time ago   hope to see more though...and of course the hypnotic regime must be part of it while he is being led through each stage of his life in real timei not sleep time

This is a truely loveable story with NO end in site for the poor soul. You must continue with all the gurly stuff for our beloved one. He is on a road to femmine pure happiness we all desire to be. So give it to him or her quickly with lots of femmine attention she is lusting for.

LOL
Hana

great story.  Please add a scene where he gets permed and female hormones are added

Fantastic, a lovely combination of dreaminess and fun, very nicely written, and just the right amount off the beaten track of many TG stories.  Please continue!

WARNING PLOT DISCLOSURES FOLLOW!

I'm of two minds about this story. On the one hand, it is a well written tale with an interesting premise and intriguing plot twists. On the other hand, some of those plot twists strain my suspension of disbelief.  

In Chapter 7 we learn what hypnotic orders Joyce gave Derek. I can understand that a wife wouldn't want her husband starring at or getting aroused by another woman, but why would a wife want her loving husband, one she allegedly loved too, to desire to emulate other women to the point of when seeing another women's pussy, he "would be thinking about having a pussy of your own and being filled with a man's cock!"

Also, I didn't quite get why Maddie wanted to give a femminine hairstyle to a guy she was originally sexually attracted to.  

I'm hoping that Cleo Girlie will provide a rational explanation in future episodes.  Maybe that's why Joyce, although apparently in a comma, is still alive and will recover to provide a better explanation.

Here's hoping future episodes render my complaints trivial and the entire story lives up to its early promise.

SS

Wonderful story - just found after you've reached Chapter 6... it's really got going now and I love the degree of detail on the hairstyling.  Let's have some colour soon!!!! Take care with the guys kissing bit - no need to make this a gay extravaganza.. just leave him hetero... PLEASE   Like Blondes,  we hetero's have more fun!

Hi girls and thank you for your comments :)
After a very long pause, just managed to finish part #5 and posted it.

Sorry its taking so long, but between my personal life and other things, Derek and Maddie's story is progressing slowly, mostly cause they're too busy to come talk to me when I'm ready to listen ;)

Ok! I am now hooked and apparently someone stole the rest of the book! Or rather someone has'nt finished it yet.  Please hurry and write another episode. I just can't stand an unfinished story! It is very interesting and captures the readers interest!  I just cant wait to read the rest!

                   Vivien

after part 4

Wow, this is getting really good! I don't know what to expect next - except that Joyce set in motion certain things that she thought she would be around to guide and now they are happening randomly??  But wait, joyce is still in the picture ... sort of

oh, phooey, I am getting out my red wig, this is just two mysterious for the blonde :-)

After part 2:
Well, I pretty much have lost any respect for Alexandra and Emelia.  Immoral and cowardly.  They pretty much know Joyce is going to screw with Derek's mind and they set it up and then leave to avoid any resposibility, leaving him totally unprotected.  

I am confused, though, as I have no idea what Joyce's got in mind for him; I expected she would guide him to become feminine, and thought he would go to go to the mall, and the she and her friends get him into a salon, etc.  But now he's hooked up with another girl, just the opposite, I would think ,of what Joyce wants, so I don't know.  UNLESS Maddie is a plant, part of joyce's plan ...  Guess I'll have to wait till part 3

Well this was a change.  From the intro, I expected this to be the road most traveled husband as womanizer, wife feminizes him to get revenge story.  Part 1 seems to have Derek as a nice guy really in love with his wife husband and Joyce as the paranoid psycho wife.  Will those two nice ladies, Mom and Emilia, really let her abuse Derek by violating him mentally?  Hopefully not, but then there wouldn't be much of a story, would there  :-)  I'm looking forward to part 2

A very good start, I can't wait for the rest..

Cleo, honey, I really like your work.  This piece is off to a great start and I am looking forward to the rest with eager anticipation.--Sharlee
PS:  I am an old lady my dear, and patience is not my strong suit--please do not keep us waiting too long.  Hugs