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Anthony/Antonia
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Comment by Berta on 08/26/22
Absolutely loved this story! Comment by Sharon on 05/07/10 What a beautiful story,every boy and his mum should enjoy making love Comment by anonymous on 12/07/08 Two comments here: 1) Every single noun in this story must have had at least two adjectives before it, and 2) At the very least, these two folks need professional help. Badly. Comment by Mke on 05/07/07 These stories really turn me on. The detail, softness and description are the very best. Comment by tr curious on 10/19/05 good stuff. i wonder if the mom ever asked her son how it felt to do what he was doing...his answer could add some richness to the story. Comment by Susan heywood on 10/10/05 These stories get me very hot and wet. Shame I don't have anyone with whom to share them, so I have to use Miss Dilly! Thank you anyway. Comment by Pauline on 06/30/05 How delicious to have you come back to form so strongly. We've missed your lovely creations and long to see you inspired again, soon, darling. Comment by MIke on 05/16/05 Great Stories!! Keep up the work. Comment by Debbie on 05/09/05 Hi |
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