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An Unbelievable Summer
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Comment by julih on 01/09/13
good start would like it continued please Comment by Stefanie on 08/30/12 Another great start to a story, but again NOT continued - left frustrated - so disappointing. Comment by wendy on 06/10/11 this is a pretty good story .can't wait to read more . Comment by mebgbvr on 07/13/10 Fair story. Not too believeable. I hope part(wherever it is improves. Comment by Shaheryar on 06/28/10 Good story. Waiting for continuation Comment by Silvia. on 06/22/10 Very bad story. Comment by juliej on 01/03/09 good story so far it was very sort part 2 please Comment by Lee lee on 01/02/08 Good so far but a little far fetched ( aren't most of these stories) it needs a lot of plot work though and why is it a male can be so quickly feminized? Wish it worked for me ...Hope you finish this story and make it plausable Comment by DJ on 01/01/08 Good story but highly unbelievable. How is a cheerleader going to pay for hormones and the operation? Also once the boy has contact with his parents at some point in which he will tell them and there goes your charecters plan for Amy. Also learn how to use quotation marks. Comment by LINDA on 12/28/07 Good start,but had a litle trouble telling thougts from spocken sentenses.Iagree with BETH about lack of parental contact over the whole vacation,but this is fiction so some lapes in normal behavior can be overloooked. the story raises several questions.1)how soon is AMY starting hormones? 2)the synopsis says the operation,how soon for that? 3)what will AMYs parents say when they come home to a new dauter? 4)how is our cheerleader paying for all this,srs is not cheap.5)how willAMY handle schoool? Eagerly awaiting more,AMY must start transitioning soon to heal before starts back in the fall. Comment by Beth on 12/28/07 Understand the following comments are meant to be helpful to you. Unfortunately, your grammar and sentence structure are atrocious. I would suggest you use the grammar checker that comes with your word processor as a starter. Rereading the story will also help you catch grammar and consistency errors. Comment by Karin Roberts on 12/27/07 A promising start, look forward to more. Comment by Angela E. on 12/27/07 Has potential,please continue. Comment by jeannette on 12/26/07 Cute story. Please continue it. Comment by tonerpig on 12/25/07 Great story so far would like to read more! Comment by b ritney on 12/25/07 please please please learn how to use quotation marks. it was a good story but really hard to read with the dialogue allk togrthrt witjout quotes. Comment by denise on 12/24/07 great story, bring on the rest of it |
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