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An Unexpected Tryst
by Janey

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Comment by SassySue on 03/10/08
While I agree with Bev that some proof-reading and spell-checking  could have improved the reading experience, this was still a good effort for a first time author.  The story was really sexy and erotic and I look forward to reading more stories by Janey.

SS


Comment by Bev on 03/07/08
I just wish you would have taken the time to have your story proofread first. It was so full of typos and misspellings that I couldn't overlook all of them to get into the storyline.
I believe the name is spelled 'Allie' not Alley (which is a street-like area between buildings).

Comment by Chris on 03/06/08
Janey,  I think you should continue this storyline. I can't wait to see what tomorrow would bring. It is HOT HOT HOT!  

Comment by Rubber and LAtex on 03/06/08
what a wonderful start to my evening!

Comment by samanthamaid on 03/05/08
Excellent story, I can only wish this would happen to me, I would love to meet that girl with something extra!!



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