feBP26 Thanks for the article post.Much thanks again. Really Great.

A truly amazing, remarkable story which I found myself unable to stop reading after I had started... yet despite the happy ending I cannot help but feel sad for Hal.  What a mind-job he was put through... to be so utterly and completely brainwashed... yet int he end one's happiness is what should count... no? ;-)

I just love reading your stories. I have read several of them and they never fail to capture my imagination and hold me entranced, regardless of the length and sometime slow pace. You have such a complete understanding of the mind of the cuck hubby and the mental obstacles he/she must overcome as he/she takes that irreversible journey along "THE PATH" to become a femininized companion. I went through a similar process with my First Wife, who relied upon a friend who was a Black Domme to mentor and guide her, as she slowly, deliberately and effectively transitioned, transformed and trained me to be her feminized little sissy. While the sequence of events and dialogue were not exactly the same, the similarities are remarkable. My real life experience has so many parallels to the experience of Cassie and Hal that I can assure you that your story is believeable and has the aura of authenticity. Like Hal, I was not always consciously aware of the end goal and probably would have bolted if I had understood from the beginning. However, it is amazing that a very macho male, like me, could be slowly led along the same path as Hal. I would never have believed that I could be so totally feminized and acculturated to the sexual desires of a woman. But, my masculinity slowly and steadily was eroded, eliminated and replaced by a strong desire to acknowledge, accept and eventually embrace the joys of pleasing, serving and submissively accepting my new sexual role. Thanks for the enormous enjoyment of reading a story that brings back so many memories, both pleasant and unpleasant.

This was a great story I enjoy how Cassie takes control of her husband.   She takes his desire for her and his sex and turns it against him.  It was interesting how she slow builds the mental image in him that he is a cockold and simultaneously mentally feminize and emasculates him into accepting it.   While a long story it was written well enough to keep the interest up and cheering each of Cassie’s success with Hal/Hallie

A really good story.  A lot of the situations were like those enjoyed by my wife and myself.  Brought a lot of sweet memories.

Thanks...

Vickie, I hope you read these posts because your story is fantastic.  The slower pacing enhances the believability of the story and the staging of the power shift is great.  The methodical reduction of her husband was devilish and I love the way you seem to really enjoy whittling down the male ego to a stump.  The world needs more women like you who can depict dominant women in a textured and authentic way.  Bravo.  

I have been reading Part 1, wonderful story. I love the way she is training him to be her cuckold. Making him confess his desires to clean her pussy, and to kneel and suck cock. My cock is rock hard, and dripping.
Thank you,
Ronnie

I previously left comments on pat1 of this fantastic novella.  I have now enjoyed parts 2&3.  This story is a super highly charged journey that takes the reader into very deep subspace.  While the subject theme is common, Ms. Tern is very innovative and dramatically spices up the plot.  Very well done!  The actual mechanics of the writting is superb and is most definately on par with top classical writers and journalist.  This work is to be savored and enjoyed in the same manner as the teasing theme in which it was written.  Accordingly, this is not a "wham bam thanks mam" read.  There is plenty of that out there .  This is art.

I have read much erotica.  "Unfaithful Wife"(part 1) is most certainly among the very best written fiction of any type.  The writer utilizes very subtle language that is very erotic and intensely arousing.  Extremely well done.  This is my first read of Ms. Tern and I look forward to reading the remainder of this story.  

Yet another triumph from the one and only Vickie.Superb!

WOW! This is a fantastic story.  The depiction of the pain and arousal that humiliation causes in us was exquisite and one of the best i have ever read!  Thank you! thank you! thank you!

Vicky, You are a superb writer who knows no bounds! You always find a new place to take us to. Thank-you
Gina

excellent....i couldnt stop reading....loved it totally....thank you

I couldn't read this, its good writing and I like the concept as far as I read , but it drags like a dead horse behind a wagon.