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An Unwanted Gift
by Reising

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The better comment was made by Raji! Sweet revenge!
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Comment by Raji on 03/22/01

Let us continue the story a bit....



I did not know how for how long I cried. Suddenly the bell chimed in to tell me that someone was at the door. I wished it was Karen. Quickly I dabbed my face with some tissue applied a coat of powder puff. It was impossible to move without applying a fresh coat of lipstick so I did that, and then moved to open the door. I was so sure that it was Karen that I just opened the door without even a security check. But it was not Karen.

" Hello.." The tall handsome guy who stood in front of me stammered as he looked me over. I could see the taxi by which he had come waiting for him on the road.

" I am sorry. I was looking for Karen Smith. Is this her house? We just came back from a business trip. I went home and found my keys missing and came to check if it had got mixed up with hers."

' Very weak story..' I thought to myself. Karen was probably two timing with this guy, who seemed to be her boss. I suddenly wanted to charm the guy to get even with Karen.

" Oh I am sorry Mr....." I paused as I put on what I hoped was my best smile. While I did that, I passed my arm over my breasts to push back the curls falling over my face. I could see that I was having an effect over te guy. He said in slightly strained voice, " Oh the name is Williams but just call me John." He pulled out his company photo identity and gave it me to prove the point.

" Oh John! Come in please. Both Karen and Paul have a left for spending the weekend with her parents. I am Paul's cousin and my name is Laura. Why dont you just send away the taxi and come in? Maybe we can locate the keys"

I extended my delicate arm for John to grip as he came into the house. As I closed the door on us, I realised that I as a beautiful woman, was now alone with a handsome man who was probably screwing my wife until last night.

"Oh John, I think Karen carried away the same purse with which she was travelling...but never mind. You could spend the night here if you wish."

I could see that John was paying little attention to what I was saying. He was seated on the settee and I stood at the entrance to the kitchen. Enough light was falling on me to make my vinyl minidress and fishnet stockings glisten.

Just to make a reference to my dress I told John," I am into modelling vinyl dresses, and I walked in just now from a shoot." John gulped and said,"Oh that is just fine!" He sort of realised that I was commenting about his ogling.

I let that pass and asked him to get himself a drink while I cleared
the house a bit, had a bath and joined him.  

 


Comment by Mr Man on 03/22/01
I liked your story a good deal. It was well written and fun to read. I hope you write more in the future and thank you for sharing this story with us.



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