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Anything for a Fast Wheelchair?
by Dawn DeWinter

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Comment by chloe june on 03/26/08
don't sell a moped short even if they are limeted to 50cc most can be up to at least a 100cc with out much trouble and 70 mph with out much work and still look like a untouched 50cc moped ha ha most 14 yr old boys can do this even with a skirt on....

Comment by Night Wolf on 11/15/03
Hey You emailed me once about my comments left and hinted at some help for this story!  I'm not sure if I could be the actual one to write it but I think I can give you the help!  Due to some idea's that are poping up in my head!

Comment by phil on 07/02/03
Hi!
I absolutley love this story! I think it would make an awesome movie!
Thaank you soooooo much for sharing it with all of us. It is very close to my ultimate fantasy :-) I can't wait to finish reading it, but I know that I will wish it never ends! Thank you! :-)

Comment by Geoff on 07/22/01
Dawn,

This is a load of bollocks! (now there's another useful 'B' word). It says a lot for my taste (or perhaps not) that I love it.

Since Sri Lanka is far more famous for tea,  I can only assume your Brazillian coffee lady is in reality an English tea lady (or tea bag, as one of my colleagues once called one, much to his immediate and painful regret) and what she read was tea leaves - and normally a much more reliable forcasting method (as my old Granny would certainly testify).   Perhaps this unfortunate confusion of methods resulted in the unreliable and incomplete prediction of Demi/Kyle's future.

I can only suggest that you are clearly off your trolley, and should seriously reconsider any plans you may have to acquire a fast electric wheelchair of your own. It could only end in disaster and then we would all be deprived of your acute and revealing observations of US culture.

Geoff


Comment by Debbie Cybill on 07/21/01
Dawn's qwriting improved immeasurably over the course of successive instalments of "Anything for a moped".  In this story, short as it is, she has reached maturity as a writer and shows a delightful, sly humour.



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