Sorry guys, this fantasy story was excellent. I'm only sad it hasn't been continued. Just like King or Steele, not real but still great escapism.

DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it, come down to haulover and fix me

Oh please! It is a STORY! A very well written story. You act like this is 'real'. Get a life!

Nanci:

  Yes, this wonderful Man would let his wife dominate him because he loved her. It was an act of perfect love.

  What the wife did was a betrayal of that love by letting others 'Use' his love of her in a most sadistic and despicable way.

  The wife should lose that wonderful love of his. She basicaly 'PIMPED' her husband out! What happened was rape, pure and simple. There was no love. He did not enjoy himself so all was invalid. Why can't you see that.

  An expression of personal love was destroyed. This story saddened me. Not all so called 'Sissies' are public. His was private until his wife made it public. So lets add humiliation to the tally. Not nice. Even a submissive has the power to say no but this darling man was given no choice.

  I know this was a fantasy but let's try to keep it nice.

 Danielle

Brenda,

I don't care what the other comments say, this was a "hot" story.  Remember he (she) had fantasized about being forced.  How lovely to have a flat crotch too!

Hugs and kisses,

nanci

And Mary would call herself a wife? not a BITCH? I cannot EVEN think of being around a woman that had that type of attitude towards men. I know men can be bastards but MOST of them are no where near desreving of such a fate unless they ASKED for it!!

Listen, I may have come off too strong on a story that was posted on a 'Fantasy' Fiction site and if so I do apologize. Still one must wonder where the basic structure of the story comes from. I just felt a lot of hate and vengence/power for no valid reason and I reacted!

  I do hope that my comments made you think a little and take a good introspective look into yourself. If you need a shoulder to cry on and an ear to listen I will try to be there for you. I do not think it is healthy to have that much negative in you.

Take care,

Goddess Bless and keep you!

Danielle

Quite right and well said Danielle.   This was well written but was most definitely not entertainment.

Hello:

  What a man and women do in the privacy of their own relationship is not something to be bandied about. Especialy with total strangers! What Mary did was a total betrayal of her husband and violated any and all trust that he had in her. I am shocked that any one would think that this is okay! Sexual privacy between husband and wife is sacred. How would you feel if your sexual habits were made commen knowlege.

  In real life this man would be well within his rights to kill those four women and seek a divorce from his bitch of a wife. Any man who is willing to do all for his wife should be held in the highest regard not made the common pool hall joke.

  I am sorry to say that this story is another example of our rapidly disolving code of ethics in marriage. No wonder men cheat! If I had a wife like this I would have her sewn up never to enjoy sexual arousal again. Then again that would make me a lesbian and according to you all bets off!

  Why would you write a story like this unless you feel it is okay to abandon all premise of a loving mutual relationship. You should be horse whipped! Maybe you will be. With your take on what is right and wrong you will enevitably run into your nemisis and then the shoe will be on the other foot!

  Enjoy!