An amusing series but you are still occasionally using words which sound write, right ? but there, their, they're ? meaning is not that intended. Is Steve really an English teacher ?

This was another good story in this series. I would really like to see more but I see it has been a long while since you've posted anything. I really liked the whole Alyson and Christina 'I hate you' relationship. Nicely done!
-grover

This is a really good story,  well written and the Jake/Christina interaction is really well done.   Some minor technical errors
(Ardennes not Ardens and German 88s are cannons not tanks) don't detract at all from the stories.   I'd actually like to see this whole series expanded and turned into a Sci-Fi Novel.

Unexpectedly, I found this an intriguing story. sci fi and fables are not my cup of tea. but this is well done I guess old Boy Scouts should stick together. Be prepared. Thanks
Another Brian

Excellent series, both this offering and "The Heir"!  The TG element is almost irrelevant.  I like the idea of Heaven and Hell as bureauacracies.  given that these are your first offerings, I can't wait to read your work a year or two from now!  BTW, I'm an Eagle Scout; there are a few of us left  :-)

This is a really neat story, excellent !!

I really appreciate the plot line.
The character Jake/Christina is great and well written and described.

OK some of the writing is maybe a little loose and can do with
some tightening up but what the HELL, I am stuck on a book and trying
to work out how some of mine can be tightened up.

A good story, and I am looking forward to more