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The Archangel Files: The Heir
by The Last Boy Scout

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Comment by grover on 05/26/08
LBS I loved this story! Micheal is a real pain in the Kester isn't he? Good character development and a good plot.
Thanks!
-grover
Comment by Lynn on 07/28/04
Thanks so much for sharing your stories. They show you
to be a natural storyteller. Few stories have given me
greater pleasure. I especially like how your stories
inspire by show people successfully doing good even if
they struggle to do so.

I see that you haven't contributed any since 2003. I
hope your write block has ended and that more Arch
angle stories or whatever type you write will be
available.

Thanks again!
Comment by steve on 05/30/03
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and would like to see what ensues. It's really nice to read a piece where I don't have to struggle not to correct the grammar and punctuation -- I guess that's the English teacher in me.
Keep writing!
Steve
Comment by Diane Lisle on 05/26/03
I really enjoyed this story. I would like you to continue the storyline. Since you have a start on it, please don't stop!
Comment by Jane Hudson on 05/26/03
Great story excelent my dear very good I enjoyed it a lot .Keep up the good work
Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/25/03
Love the story.  you show real talent in this tale dear.
Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 05/25/03
Love the story.  Your talent is tremendous.  Please do more, especially of this series.
Thank you for providing me with this wonderful entertainment.
Sharlee Snyder


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